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Posted: 10 years ago
This is the second story of yours which i came across and this one as good as the earliar one...u have a wonderful art of story writing. ..i m totally intrigued..waiting for more!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well, I had not planned on giving teasers for this fiction. But since many of you wanted one after the last chapter, here is it...
And also, I am updating the index on the 1st page on a special request from one particular lovely person. So rejoice and here you go!

THE WHITE RAINBOW

Teaser for Chapter 7


"I asked you something Khushi..." Arnav said smugly, pretending to act nonchalant, "did you get drenched in the shower? Because...its still too early for monsoons in Ahmedabad"

"Yes" she met his gaze and her smile was wintry, "I got drenched in the shower, then my leg slipped and I hit my head on the floor" she let a tone of sarcasm enter her voice, "Now, are you done or do you have any more questions?"

"Hit your head? Clearly!" Arnav replied, as he walked inside and did a quick hi-five with Akash.

"Whoosh" Akash exclaimed, "Do you guys know each other?"

"Of course! Who doesn't know him" Khushi smiled more widely than she felt inclined to do and spoke in a rather demeaning tone, "Arnav Singh Raizada...aged thirty-two...alumni of my college since the last five years. Topper of his batch, and now returned as a visiting faculty to tell the students that the world is no fairyland and also how stupid and impractical their ideas are", she said with emphasis, "Oh wait, I got more...He is also the founder and CEO of AR Designs, which is currently struggling to make its name. Was in a serious relationship with a girl of his batch- Sheetal Kapoor, but she called it off... for unknown reasons, so that makes him very much available right now." she spoke in a single breath and frowned, "Now Mr. Raizada, care to explain what you are doing in my house on a lazy Sunday morning?"

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So, what do you think? Well, like I had told you previously, this story is really close to my heart...so would really like to know your thoughts...and...

Care to show a little extra love for Shalini? 😉

I am going to start the next chapter (possibly a MahaUpdate) on a new thread...so would request all the readers in my PM list to show their presence and tell me what do you think of this story so far and here is my favorite part...what do you think is coming next?

PS- The MahaUpdate for 'The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND' is posted.

Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! Interesting teaser shalini
I think she really hit her head somewhere...
She will never stop her blabbering... i think by the end of this teaser arnav will be smirking and surely ask her why is she gathering so much information about him...
But why didn't akash know about arnav working in kushi's college when they are in touch with each other over phone ???
Enough of my rambling... Waiting for the update shalini. ..
Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loving the cat and mouse fight
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Posted: 10 years ago
ASR may think that Khushi is an all starry-eyed student having a crush on her professor 😉 orrr...though highly unlikely ASR may think she is quite professional as she has made a thorough study of a person 😕 😆 but honestly I feel Khushi is gonna go bezerk at the prospect of having to spend the weekend with ASR at her place 😆 what with him being her prospective bridegroom 🤣

pls continue soon 😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
Hats off to you Khushi. Lets see what answer ASR have for this little speech regarding himself.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hahahaha wt a teaser...khushi spit an essay on arnav singh raizada woh bhee at super sonic speed...all research she had done on him...thats right out there loud and clear ...lol...loving it ...and i am sure this time now arnav going to be in shock state after listening to her :)
i guess its time for the truth to out that wt arnav doing on sunday morning at gupta's place...time for khushi to faint after knowing this breaking news ...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting teaser
Khushi had given extra information about Sheetal what will be Arnav's reaction on it
Loved to see their nok jhok
Waiting for full update eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW...INTERESTING TEASER...
LOVE THIS KHUSHI N D WAY SHE GAVE BIO- DATA OF ARNAV...SUPERBLY WRITTEN...
WAITING 4 D UPDATE...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting teaser dear.. khushi & her blubbering... Eagerly waiting 4 it...

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