ArHi SS: Inertia [Completed] - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful update
so much thoughts...
and some history too
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love Venkat Rao - such a positive influence on a person's life from what I have read today. The best part is he has no lies what is going on with Kushj who he has hired on the spot. Leela's plight may be from a different century but she was just as alone in her quest as Kushj feels right now with different cause of course. I also like Leela and would love to know her story too. My middle name is one of the oldest names around that is very rarely used. When I asked my mum why she picked that, she said it was of a warrior princess who dressed, trained and went to war like men in the old time without the men around her knowing she was a woman. they only found out when she got hurt. I hope you do have time to explore her character.
It is funny how young people may dismiss something as it does not fit in the way they classify things, like Kushi wondering what good archeology is for? Love how he tied it to something that she can relate to with science. He gave her enough info for her to bite the bait and now she is hooked. Was it that boredom was leading her to over analyze the relationship issues with Payal? Sometimes an idle mind has too much time to think of the what ifs, to dwell on the bad part instead of taking action as in her last statement where her resolve is to go talk to Payal. Seriously from my one sided view, this is what is needed to dissolve any misunderstandings between the 2 sisters as frankly Payal may not be aware about any issues being too wrapped up in her own fun.

Also love Garima's advice about getting the thoughts out of her head - have been trying to tell an 11 year old to do this but it is hard when she is distracted with electronics and friends to go hang out with now that the weather is getting better . . .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love mornings in summer. Hostel life has turned me into a night person but still I enjoy mornings. I feel its the coolest time during summer. Its pure and serene. Driving at 5 in the morning is a soothing experience. It calms the mind. So I loved that part of the journey. 😊
The history of the place is quite interesting. Khushi could somewhat relate herself to Leela as she knew how it feels to be lonely.
Sometimes people get so separated with time that it becomes difficult to bridge the gap. But someone has to take the lead to mend such relations. Probably Khushi is going to take the first step in mending her relationship with Payal. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If one was ever to put all the knowledge in the world together - it would be like a jigsaw puzzle that was solves. It would create a whole, symmetrical picture. Thats how it is. Things are never independent - they relate to each, no matter how thin the strands that join them.
Look at the irony. She wonders why the past is important. Two minutes later, she can relate to the princess who dies over 6 centuries ago.

I wonder how the conversation with Payal will go..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hey,
Just found this one...wishing to read more, I loved how you have expressed khushi's thoughts and feelings, Do update more,

Eager to know what would khushi talk with payal...saying that, I sincerely feel that payal should realise her mistakes, And what's with lavanya & khushi???Is it like childhood enmiety? Hope you would clarify that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Talk always helps. . Hope sister sought out things soon... loved update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice story
very different concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
The closeness khushi share with payal
she is loosing it
in front of lav
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
True summer learning. Loved the chapter. Thx for the PM.

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