ArHi SS: Inertia [Completed]

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

i am really disappointed about arnav's stance ...he proved that he is lavannya's friend ...he should not interfere between girls without knowing the facts... at this moment i can understand all three girls ...payal knows that khushi is her sister and she took her for granted that she won't go any where..lavanya is worried as she forms new friendship with payal that khushi can come between them...in all this khushi lost out...lets hope khushi learn from this and earn some independence ...she will build her character

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saschades

@saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

nice one

poor khushi feeling left out all the time

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

I love Shashi. He is a cool father. The sisters are separated and they both know it. I can't figure out why there is so much hatred between La and Khushi. I was somewhat guessing that Arnav would be a part of Payal's gang. The relationship between Arnav, La and Khushi has left me confused. Waiting for the next part.

P.S. What is the genre of this FF??

Edited by barsha_dash - 10 years ago

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Last few lines hurt me too. How can they behave like this Khushi.

I am not angry with lavanya as people like her will meet you at every step of life. But what hurt me is payal's behaviour towards Khushi. Is she doing deliberately or she is so dumb that she can't see she is ignoring her sister for outsiders.

Loved Khushi's reply to both arnav and la. They needed this reminder.

Hope she could find some peace and friend at Dr. Vanket's place.

Fabulous update RB. thanks for pm.

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Bavari

@Bavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Interesting concept. Waiting to read more.

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Payal is probably trying to be part of the cool gang in college and in that process has been neglecting Khushi and being quite insensitive. Khushi is hurt but at the same time does not want to seem like she is begging to be part of the group. Good for her, she has found something really interesting to do on her own.

Poor Arnav is probably clueless about all this negativity between Lavanya and Khushi and got caught in between! Will he try to talk to Khushi again?

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Read all the three chapters... Loved the beginning.. So it's basically resentment stemming out of missing Payal.. Who is being oblivious to her feelings and also LavanyA's snide unwelcome gestures... But Arnav's stand on this is yet to be known.

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awesome read all 3 updates .

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Poor Khushi felt really bad for her.. all her happy mood was spoiled in seconds.. well no problem she will find her happiness on her own she doesn't need people to make happy.. loved father-daughter convo.. shashi is sweet father he is aware of his daughters not been seen together.. loved the update..

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Aw ww poor Khushi!! And poor Lavanya too... Maybe she too is trying to fit in n feel more accepted n secure... Teenage is such a dramatic phase! M genuinely waiting for K to do some soul-searching n accept the fact that change is inevitable !! (m praying the same for myself!)But then again, story is titled 'inertia' for a reason, right ?

Edited by Tiramisu_coffee - 10 years ago