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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome start..interesting...👍🏼

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Very good start... Feeling jealous though how easily friends become more important then relatons ... In everybody's life this situation comes ...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Summer, cousin and fights between them is common in everyone's childhood. Fighting for who will play with whom or who will sleep together are such things which nobody can forget.

Story by you with all this is going to be amazing journey.

Chapter one is brilliant. I am excited to read it.

Thanks for pm.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Good one... Quite realistic..looking forward much to the story..strikes a chord somewhere...

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

A good start

Waiting to read more

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ammygurl

@ammygurl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

If I were to read just one author's fanfictions forever and give up the rest, I would read yours. Even though I don't follow IPKND, your stories make me keep coming back here.

Its good to know that someone else, much real like ourselves, lives on the periphery of the support system meant to love us. Sometimes, one feels ignored. One escapes life to remove that spell. You describe it so wonderfully that one might feel it's a treat to feel the way Khushi is feeling. You get little nuances, of everyday life, sketching life so brilliantly.

Top hat salute.

Regards

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anukap

@anukap

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Super, another treat from you. Keep it coming. Cheers!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Another interesting journey with you... come bring it on will be with you.. well loved the start.. can understand khushi and her loneliness and above all losing her best friend cum sister to others..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

WOW!! beautiful start dear...loved it

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

My life is kinda out of control at the moment but I am definitely looking forward to this. Will read and get back with my long ramblings soon . . . Love murukus