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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pravallika

Awww!!!! You have given an awesome ending to this story choti...

I can't imagine any other way of ending it...
Even though arnav sacrificed his dreams for his love, it was worth it for what he had realised .. "this is home"
Kushi tried hard to convince him to take it up, but i loved the way arnav was trying to say that he had not sacrifised anything but it was his love for her which made him to stay back..
This story is beautifully written with a wonderful solution for their problem. .
Take a bow and hope you will start another story like this in future. .
All the best best dear :D


I love your comments! Thank you so much for sticking with me through this story- it's such a pleasure reading our comments. I'm glad you thought I did justice to their story- it's such a compliment (and a relief!) You won't believe how much I mulled over that ending.

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nik1310


👏 this is an amazing and fitting ending. Just right and once again my compliments on a job (this FF) well done; have enjoyed every bit of this journey with you. Thanks and yes please do write after a well earned break. Some fun naughty OS probably. 😉


Heheheheh I could use a BTD...😳 Thank you SO much for always leaving comments! It makes me smile :)

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety421

A standing applause to u for this amazing story... wonderful...
The writing...love for our country. ...Arnav...Khushi...everything was amazing...
I love the end. ...!!!!!
Perfect epilogue to resistance. ...


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Awesome ending. Khushi named her son after her father. She achieved her goal. Arnav realized that his priorities have changed and decided to stay back in India with his family. Very heart touching epilogue, thank you choti.


I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for commenting, it's so nice to see you here!

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Just finished reading the last chapter and the epilogue.

Trust Arnav to give Khushi the right direction in the quest for freedom.
This was surely the right decision.
Khushi could actively participate in the feedom struggle and be safe.
Loved the fact that they called their little one Shashi.
And that Ashok too lived to see an indpendant India.
You described beautifully the moment of freedom.
Loved the recitation of the Tryst with Destiny.
And the cute family scene with Khushi Arnav and their little one.

Arnav was with Khushi in this endeavour .
And then Khushi offered to do the same for Arnav.
Loved the way both are their for each other.
And Arnav then made the right decision to stay back home with his family.
This is one of your best works, Choti.
Loved it .
Hoping now that you will start a new one.
Maybe a fun story as you promised.
Waiting here! !


Charu Di,
Your comments are amazing. Just- amazing. Seeing your chili brings such a smile to my face. I love your enthusiasm, your humor, and how you pick out details I've added in there without needing many words. It has been such a joy getting to know you, and I absolutely *adore* you. You're such a wonderful person.

Much love,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Brilliantly Written..Simply Superb...👏


Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anu1017

Amazing ending to an awesome story!! Totally loved the ending, going to miss the story. Hopefully you will start a story soon :-)


Thank you so much! I've loved reading your comments. Hopefully the spark of an idea will come soon...

Love always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...ASB100...

Choti, I am just so sad right now. I don't want Resistance to end! This has been such an amazing journey, and I am just in awe of your writing prowess. You've always been a wonderful writer, no doubt, but with this story, you've set the bar really really high. The transformation of characters in this story is simply amazing, and the way you've seamlessly blended the character arcs with the story arc even more so. This is one of those stories that I am going to reread again and again, because it deserves to be read and savored multiple times.

When you asked me about the Lodhi Gardens all those months ago, little did I know then, that I would come to love this story so so much. Thank you for writing such a kick ass story, Choti! I am so proud of you and so glad to know a person as dedicated and committed as you are! Love you loads, and waiting with bated breath for your next writing venture! 🤗🤗🤗

P.S. I will post a better comment for the last chapter and the epilogue, but abhi I am a dukhi aatma because the story ended. :((


Asha,
You have been my biggest fan. I am so, so, so grateful for your friendship and your support. Thank you for easing my nervousness, for always being so excited to read my chapters, for always reminding me to have faith in myself. Thank you for answering my vague questions and for always maango-ing (not the fruit 😆) more- your energy for this story often inspired me to write (and I mean that in a completely non-cliched way. It really did.). I am SO happy to have you as my friend. You make my day, you wonderful person!

Love you always,
Choti.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Choti.,, what beautiful journey it has been. This was the perfect ending to this story.

I was thrilled while reading about Nehru's speech. Midnight 12:00 am and the freedom... So beautifully written, Choti.

Arnav's dilemma and his ultimate decision to accept India as home, wow, I liked it very much.

You are a fantastic writer Choti. Take a break and do start a new story soon. I will be waiting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
A late and a last unres here for this story

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