Virika SS: Paradise in Your Eyes

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Priya

@Priya_ashvik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Loved loved loved the update..
Thank you soo much for such a beautiful description...❤️
Their never ending and ever growing love is something i admire the mosttt...😳

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Simarpreetm

@Simarpreetm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Serah take a bow girl.. Amazing ss.. Couldn't hv got a better ending than what u gave.. Though I wish u continued this story further.. All said n done, u gave it the most beautiful n apt ending.. How well u described their shopping spree.. Hayeee the cuts in her saree n the way u hv described them.. Can just imagine the wildest thoughts tat viren must be getting n how hard it wld hv been for him to control himself.. This just took me into a trance.. The most beautiful world of Virika whr only love exists.. Their walk on the beach can be marked as the most romantic walk.. Viren wanting to show his love to jeevika n how cutely he writes that's he loves jeevika on the sand n then says tat even the beach is jealous tat viren gets to love her when she says tat the water will wipe it off.. Serah u create magic with ur words.. How calmly viren makes jeevika understand tat no matter what n who bears the child it's always gonna be theirs.. Their sweet kisses on the beach.. Thank u serah for another fab update n the cute ss.. Hope we keep getting more n more stories from u.. Thanks for keeping virika alive for us through ur lovely stories.. :))

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

awesome ending

loved this story start to finish

superb

thank you

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wal43

@wal43

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

oh my god

such a romantic update

loved it

amazing

awesome

superb

I really had Goosebumps and felt like reading it again and again

the beach walk 😊

shopping scene was really very romantic and the purple sari thing😳

thank you for updating and the pm

sorry for commenting late

keep writing others too

I know it had to end but a big thank you..😊👏

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Unres

What? Last update? NOOO 😭

I know it was an SS and it had to end soon!

Anyways coming to the update

It was phenominal! Loved it!

The trial of dresses, their romantic moments, the description about their feelings was amazing!

The beach part was my fav! Viren trying to be young in Love 😃😉

My fav lines were these and my most fav part!

"I've always been the one who wanted to kiss you," his lips brushed hers with the statement and she pressed forward, but he hung back just out of reach, "And you never said it, but we both know you've always wanted to kiss me too."

The end was too beautiful! Viren scrawled Viren loves jeevika in sand was super cute!

Thank you for writing this amazing SS!

Keep writing more!

You rock serah! Love you!

Edited by MyKryan - 10 years ago

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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

It ended??

no no... i dont want to see the ending

Girl u write so well

it makes me feel like i m dreaming splendid update again

and super amazing ending

hattsoff to you!

you are brilliant!!

Just keep writing more!

cant get enough of your stories

there are few lines which i loved!!

And yes i have this story and whenever i m free or sad i read it :)
actually not particularly this one!

all of your :D

keep writing

i m waiting for another SS By YOU ;)

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vidhichaudhury

@vidhichaudhury

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Superb update.loved it
thanks for pm

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

S
E
R
A
H

Ur A

Phenemonel
Superbbb
Talented
Virika
Writer!!!
Falling in love with virika all over again, and specially with this story!!! I am sad as its ending but everything has to end! But
THANK YOU
So much for putting the shopping part!!! I <3 U
The update was
Midnblowing
Romantic
Superbb
Sexy
Clothes
Shopping
Virika
Goa
Love
Awesome
Mindblowing
Incredible
Tooo goood
Splendid!!!
Update and Story!!!
Loved each and every line of this update from the baby shopping till the hawteness saree romance to the end of Goa romance! Tooo goood!!!! I can read ur stories all over again n again and never get bored! Its just feel so new and amazing!!!!
Thankkk You!!!! Serah!!!
Cant wait to read more of your stories!!!
Waiting eagerly!!!
Love uuu n thankk uuu once again!!!
Paradise in my eyes!!!