Awww a dedication to me?!?!? Thank you đł you are so sweet â¤ď¸
*wipes tears of joy away while I smile with pride and point at the at the other saying "that's right people she chose me!"* hahahahahah im kidding! All the readers are awesome đ especially those who leave commentsđ
Now moving on to your phenomenol story, I loved it!! It was jam packed with lots of activities, suspense and content yet I still wanted more.
first of all let's talk about Arnav and Nikhil's bond, I loved it so much.. nikhil won arnav over so effortlessly and the fatherly love arnav has for him just makes me go "Awww" â¤ď¸ it was EVERYTHING arnav dressing him up, nikhil behaving like arnav, their man to man talk, arnav holding him proactively and lovingly whole he clutches onto arnav even in his sleep.. (nikhil is just like his mom in the last mart. Heh heh)
I hope buaji doesn't mess things up by pushing payal into Arnav's arms instead of Akash's... đĽą
the part when lavanya raised her hand on nikhil I was just đ˛ how dare she!! I hope Arnav gives her a piece of his mind.
Akash's reaction to payal admitting that her buaji is trying to fix her up was real good.. and she has started dressing up nicely for him?? Ooh la la... I can hear the pay ash music playing đ "hey hey hey heeey oh ho ho ho ho hooo" (I think the music when something like that right...)
There is so much more to write.. I haven't even spoken about Appu amd Nikhil! But I will stop here for now before it gets too long..
The cliffhanger was great. It left me with so many qns!!
When will arnav and Khushi find out about each other?
How will they react?
What's gonna happen during their date?
What is Arnav going to do to lavanya?
Why did Sham want to pay khushi a visit? Is it cause she refused to go to court?
Who is rukhmani and why does Sham want her to be prepared in a special way?
And so many more qns!! But I will stop bombarding you for now.
One more thing before i dissappear.. I am so amazed as to how you wrote a nice and long story without a single Arshi scene yet you managed to keep me hooked on and interested through out! Good job di :)
With love,
Hiraah
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