#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete) - Page 46

Loved the update. I specially like the fact that this story has lots of drama just like the original IPKKND. There are twists and you hold the suspense till the end of the update and end the update on such a note that I am greedy for the next one. 👏

Originally posted by: sillykudi

Kaisa web you are spinning?!!So eager to know the story line and climax

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..

Shalini dear, please don't take my words on your heart that I find this chapter kind of colorless... Though some light moments were there. I like Arnav & Nikhil interaction. Arnav and Khushi was part of the update, but I am missing Arshi in your story and especially in this chapter. I know this is too early to say. But kya krein jahan Arshi na hoon maza nahi ata...I am amazed that Manorama has no problem with Payal...

Originally posted by: barsha_dash

Loved the update. I specially like the fact that yhis story has lots of drama just like the original IPKKND. There are twists and you hold the suspense till the end of the update and end the update on such a note that I am greedy for the next one. 👏

Mademoiselle Shalini, ma belle,

You make me speechless with every new update. I have finally finished reading this update. A little bit in the morning, a little bit more in the afternoon and finally now, I finished it after a great Zumba class and while drinking a bowl of safron tea:-)

1- I am so excited about that outgoing event at school. I am sure our ASR finds a pretext to join the rest of his family... Please send them there ASAP

2- I will forget about Nelson Mandela and Gandhi and their non-violence strategies and methods and announce that at this specific moment, I wanna hit that filthy creature. Please make his visit as short as you can :-).
3- Nikhil is Arnav's son. I have no doubt about it :-)

4- I didn't know our ASR could be ITNI sweet and nice to the kids and CHAPEAU! ( bow to him) he handled beautifully our angry little boy :-)

5- I wanted to scream when Khushi didn't answer Amanji's question about her job.

6- Appu is lovely and sweet and I love the way she shows her sisterly antics :-)

7- Akash and Payal are gorgeous together, hai na?
8- Your writing style is wonderful, flowing like a river, and sober...

9- I am miserably waiting for the dinner rendezvous.

10- Waise, when do you update ? Humare matlab, no pressure but please Ayez pitie de nous ( have mercy on us)

Ps. I will probably come back and leave more comments to encourage you for an early update and a very long one full of Arshi moments

Ps 2. What the!

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Arunima...as I saw your comment...You wont believe..I was literally holding my breath thinking...is that another criticism/negative feedback!

I am glad you liked it and now am taking a deep breath (and smiling too)

Haha...I try to do exactly what you mentioned in your last line...and will keep doing it...lol

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Glad that you are smiling now. I always try to see the positive side of every thing and even if I don't like certain things I critisize in a positive way. The story is going smoothly in a good way so no worries for you.😊 Abhi toh story suru hui hai 😆

Originally posted by: mojgan

Mademoiselle Shalini, ma belle,

You make me speechless with every new update. I have finally finished reading this update. A little bit in the morning, a little bit more in the afternoon and finally now, I finished it after a great Zumba class and while drinking a bowl of safron tea:-)

1- I am so excited about that outgoing event at school. I am sure our ASR finds a pretext to join the rest of his family... Please send them there ASAP

2- I will forget about Nelson Mandela and Gandhi and their non-violence strategies and methods and announce that at this specific moment, I wanna hit that filthy creature. Please make his visit as short as you can :-).
3- Nikhil is Arnav's son. I have no doubt about it :-)

4- I didn't know our ASR could be ITNI sweet and nice to the kids and CHAPEAU! ( bow to him) he handled beautifully our angry little boy :-)

5- I wanted to scream when Khushi didn't answer Amanji's question about her job.

6- Appu is lovely and sweet and I love the way she shows her sisterly antics :-)

7- Akash and Payal are gorgeous together, hai na?
8- Your writing style is wonderful, flowing like a river, and sober...

9- I am miserably waiting for the dinner rendezvous.

10- Waise, when do you update ? Humare matlab, no pressure but please Ayez pitie de nous ( have mercy on us)

Ps. I will probably come back and leave more comments to encourage you for an early update and a very long one full of Arshi moments

Ps 2. What the!

Beautiful update! Definitely nikhil is Arnav's son! Sad thing is still arnav doesn't recall about their one meet years back with khushi... Who is this Rhukmini? Is she a look a like to khushi?
Thanks for the pm...waiting for more.

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Mojgan Belle...you make me speechless with your lovely words! I got so confused when you spoke about Mandela and Gandhi...and then I started laughing when the full impact of your words hit me!!!

You are too sweet and beautiful...and I am so excited after reading your comment that I have straightaway opened a word doc for the next chapter!!

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I am itni excited that I am ready to leave as many comments as possible:-) ok. Ok. I will not disturb you anymore right now because I don't want to distract you ma belle!

Je t'embrasse et bonne chance!

Oh my Allah.