#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete)

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Mojgan

@mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Very very dearest Shalini,

I knew deep down in my heart that the kiss scene was too good to be true in the Asli Donia so our Parishan Singh Raizada has Ajib dreams hahahaha I Love this Aman and his great idea hahahahaha what a cool doctor who prescribes date instead of medicine:-)

This Khushi Kumari Gupta rocks. Imagining mr Lion Singh Raizada's face while hearing NO for a lunch or dinner meeting is sooo good.

I love Akash and Payal encounter too. Very nice and promising indeed.

You are sublime and your writing is awesome. Thanks for such an amazing update.

PS. Can I ask the essential question? Have a look at the link in my previous comment to see what you do with your enthusiastic readers.

PS 2. You made my spring break more relaxing and brighter.

PS3. I made a new indian friend in my Zumba class. She was very nice and knew IPKKND. Most of the Indian-Americans I meet here, haven't seen the show. I told her to read your story :-)

PS. I love this story of yours. Have I ever told you that? ;-) please keep that jerk away as much as you can.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

loved it

is Nik shyama' son

y dnt i feel so

n wht is the cat n mouse game b/w ASR n khushi dam intrigued

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luvbug

@luvbug

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

awesome update... n i love this khushi,...she is bold n strong...haha n fantastically rejects ASR...

payash scene was cute 😊

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sweet-fairy

@sweet-fairy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Awesome update

so its a dream of ASR...and he's asking for medicine 😆

continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

That was a lovely update.. But why is Khushi not telling ArnAv about her married status and being mother of 5 year old..? That would definitely stop him from pursuing her... This will only give him chAnce to accuse her of leading him by hiding the facts about her..

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Lovely update!! Khushi is so brave here and outspoken and I'm loving her so much. Only that Arnav can't be a gentleman for once!!!

Payal has finally meet her Prince Charming :)

I can't wait for Arnav to find out khushi hve a son, I'm dying to see/read his reaction.

Good job :)

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Uarnkhui

@Uarnkhui

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Nice part Finley arnav and khushi going dinner.

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hiraah

@hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

I'm doing a happy dance im doing a happy dance im doing a happy dance

Yay! PayAsh's scenes were awesome! I love how this Akash is shy but also bold and how he pulls Payal's leg! It was hilarious. I always knew Akash had a commendable position in AR but he never showed that he had power in anyways at all it was as if there was no chance for him to give his opinion.. so I loved how he took matters into his own hands in deciding Payal's faith and at the same time making up for bumping into her (although we all know he can't be blamed)

And now payal!!! It's so good to see she is still the normal sweetu that bua ji can over work and bully but those little moments of boldness that we saw in her in IPK is full on here and she is getting a job instead of staying home and being dependant on the world.. Both the gupta girls have showed what they are made of in this update and I am loving it so much!

Arnav is such a mean dude.. gosh is it wrong that I find that determination and stubbornness of his so damn sexy??😲😳

How can guy be so perfect????

There is so much to look forward to in this story!

Arnav finding out Nikhil is khushi's son

Arnav funding our about Sham

Arnav finding out he is the reason khushi ended up with Sham (bwaaa 🤢 just saying these lines make me want to puke..)

Payal and Akash's love story

This new Payal's reaction towards mami ji and her hello hi bye bye

Offo there is so much to look forward to and the more I write the more excited and impatient I feel so let's stop here.. cause I know it's gonna be a while before we reach all that..

as for now, I will just look forward to this "business meeting"😉

With love,

Hiraah

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

so it's a dream .. like payal's character and luv her meeting with akash.. so finally a dinner .. waiting to see what will happen next.

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Wow sissy..finally u remembered that u r keeping us waiting.. As usual osm update..bt that was a dream ???? :( chalo koi baath nahi..use jaldi real banalo!! So arnav dint meet nikhil's momma..bt met his bua...so payal s now joining shukla business..aagaya na shalini ki twist ;) payal aur aakash ki meeting ho gayi...kuch kuch hone waala hain?? Arnav s nt asr for anything.. He will have his way..waiting for the date!!!