[ArHi] TS: Those Three Words COMPLETED Pg 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Very nice story...I'm surprised that its Khushi who is holding back...Don't know why...Eagerly waiting for that part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
amazing update. Loved it.
Arnav loves her so much, she also loves him. But something is holding her from verbalizing that.
Arnav wants to hear that so much.
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
arnav loves his wife more than himself...curious to know why sushi did not say those three words arnav wants to hear...i guess its other way round,but like the way arnav confess first...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Very nice but why is she not confessing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
beautiful begining...love it...Whta is Khushi hiding..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: rafiki84

I res 😃

*Edit*


So... 😃 when I read the the title, I straight away felt, it's Arnav who's not saying the three words. After reading the first, I realized I trolled myself 😆

So... Arnav Singh Raizada loves his wife with every fiber of his being and Khushi is the one holding back? Hmmm... Definitely something is holding her back that even after being married for 8 months she is not comfortable saying it back but just being wishfully wishing him to understand on his own *sighh* which he actually DOES!, but ofcourse you won't tell it now (Ya, I'm sOoper curious😆

Update jaldi okay?

P.S where can I get an Arnav like this one? He is too sweet for his own good ❤️


How sexist and judgmental of you!😛😃 You just assume men don't express while women have verbal diarrhea.

I wish I knew where to get an Arnav like that. *dreamy*

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: canapoem

Such a beautiful and touching start.


It's normally women who voice their love more than men but here it is Arnav who keeps voicing his love for her, yet Khushi is not able to say those three magical words back to him, why?

Woman's heart is always compared to an ocean, so deep that she can hold so many feelings inside her, so many hidden secrets inside her. Looks like Khushi is holding some deep hidden secrets, some demons, some sorrows, some never healing wounds within her.

Will Arnav be her Knight with shining armour and kill those demons within her and free her of her sorrows?



Well she has our reasons. But we all women talk to each other and generalize a bit too much with no perspective from men, you know. We aren't necessarily super human in our abilities compared to the other gender!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: _Mini_

Oh!! I love it... Is this the one you were telling me about?

This is awesome.

Yep, but a much evolved/modified version of it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ntmrjn

so sweet way of expression.
Arnav is very loving but feels like khushi is being consious of her ownself.is she blind? Or disabled?

Nope. Nothing like that!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

Its bloody brilliant!!!

Aww! I'm all visualizing n smiling n blushing n twisting around. Gosh! I loved it yaar!!!

Okie, drooling apart, I really loved how uv split d chappy into arnavs n khushis POV. gives a clear n closer idea to be in their shoes as we read. Good attempt at that.

Coming to the story, there is this undeniable transparent thread of sensitive love underlaying all the words. U know, the kind that has d power to leave its impact on u? I loved that aspect.

I'm gonna wait for u to reveal d story behind that unreachable n unspoken tear, but n then, I loved d emotions n depths of words that surrounded that particular tear followed by d bright smile. Bravo again. Great going.

D silent love, d patient anticipation, d strong bond, d unspoken n yet clearly heard promise of hearts. Brilliant combination. Kudos again!

I loved d last line though. U give e erything of u n yet I want more. Its really touchy. A good touchy.

Congos on d new work hun. Stunning start.


Love&Hugs.


Thank you for reading Candy.
It's just the style I chose. Alternating first person narrative, since this is a short story.
Mostly nothing more than a random thought of my random mind.

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