[ArHi] TS: Those Three Words COMPLETED Pg 14

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musa khan

@musax007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rafiki84
I res 😃

*Edit*

So... 😃 when I read the the title, I straight away felt, it's Arnav who's not saying the three words. After reading the first, I realized I trolled myself 😆

So... Arnav Singh Raizada loves his wife with every fiber of his being and Khushi is the one holding back? Hmmm... Definitely something is holding her back that even after being married for 8 months she is not comfortable saying it back but just being wishfully wishing him to understand on his own *sighh* which he actually DOES!, but ofcourse you won't tell it now (Ya, I'm sOoper curious😆)

Update jaldi okay?

P.S where can I get an Arnav like this one? He is too sweet for his own good ❤️

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ntmrjn

@ntmrjn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

so sweet way of expression.
Arnav is very loving but feels like khushi is being consious of her ownself.is she blind? Or disabled?

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

thats wonderful and brilliant start
just heartwarming
want to read more of this

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Uzii

@Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nice chapter so its khusi who is holding back n arnav is in love.

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harman12

@harman12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

interesting story but what is holding khushi back

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

beautiful n interesting start dear...

m curious to know more about khushi...

please continue soon...

thanks 4 pm...

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome. Come on Khushi just say the word to him already, dammit...you know Teekay, I was quite certain it was Arnav who would have a problem saying them. Cannot wait to see what will happen next.

Best,

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

So beautiful! Lovely...warm. Sigh!

Everyone always expects the guy to have a problem with "the words", but us girls have issues too. Of course she'll come around.

Teekey, you know your words and use them well :p 👏

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Its bloody brilliant!!!

Aww! I'm all visualizing n smiling n blushing n twisting around. Gosh! I loved it yaar!!!

Okie, drooling apart, I really loved how uv split d chappy into arnavs n khushis POV. gives a clear n closer idea to be in their shoes as we read. Good attempt at that.

Coming to the story, there is this undeniable transparent thread of sensitive love underlaying all the words. U know, the kind that has d power to leave its impact on u? I loved that aspect.

I'm gonna wait for u to reveal d story behind that unreachable n unspoken tear, but n then, I loved d emotions n depths of words that surrounded that particular tear followed by d bright smile. Bravo again. Great going.

D silent love, d patient anticipation, d strong bond, d unspoken n yet clearly heard promise of hearts. Brilliant combination. Kudos again!

I loved d last line though. U give e erything of u n yet I want more. Its really touchy. A good touchy.

Congos on d new work hun. Stunning start.

Love&Hugs.