*Completed* Arshi TS: That Moment.. [Last Part: page 21] - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the PM and continue it soon
Thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderfulll...
loved it.. waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
AWESOME!!!
I loved how you managed to take out the part I told you about and you did it so well!! if it had been me I would have spent another life time thinking of a replacement for the words I was replacing but you managed to just take those parts out (to those who don't know tell your gutter minds to relex.. there was no such scene for this update😛) without ruining the flow an instead, you patched it up nicely such that any new reader would think this was the original piece. Well Done chottu didi *smiles like a proud mother)
I liked how you brought us on the quick but relevantly detailed journey of Arnav's and Khushi's before all the way to the state of understanding and friendship they are in now.
its nice to see Arshi so comfortable with each other. and their whole conversation after the Arnav's associates left was so sweet. the "if ur happy, im happy" line made me sigh in contentment
and oh god!!! the "do you feel something Arnav" was hilarious!!!😆😆 I cant belive Arnav thought "isn't she supposed to feel this after..." his train of thought in this story is so funny.
it was a really sweet update and I want more!! hehe don't forget to update this story at least once more before you run off..
With love,
Hiraah
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant
Thanks for the pm
Looking forward to reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So they have started dating. Next will be to get payash married.
I like Arnav's character very much. But Khushi is the sweetest thing in the world. It's no wonder Arnav fell for her.

Aww butterflies in her stomach.
That is so so sweet

Thanx for pm and sorry for late comment





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update. .
khushi is still unaware of fact ...
she already started developing feelings for him...
oh finally marriage is fixed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Like it
Wow finally manorama agreed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww...khushi is so cute..i so much liked her...
amazingpart...
loved d update ..very much...cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww so cute..
Loving it.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww so cute!!!!
Waiting for d nxt part
Post asap!!!

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