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Sakhi2013

@Sakhi2013

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#921

Hi Jigs,

As always one of strong update...

Kushi herself is strong woman ...why she is insecure for herself ...

jigs I hope you have wonderful spring break

Please PM me when you update...

👏 👏 👏

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#922

Insecurity.. the biggest eater of peace!

Why do I get the feeling that this Alisha must be knowing about Khushi's insecurities? Even now maybe she saw Khushi and purposefully did that. Why didn't Khushi come on time? Did Arnav give up on hoping she would come and didn't care what Alisha did, just letting her be coz he has to behave in the crowd?

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#923

Im team Arnav!!

I dnt find any reason..no matter how big to let khushi decide the fate of their marriage!

Seeing frm a girls pov shes bound to feel insecure..but for gods sake hes your husband..your love..your life

M really intriguied to read wht really pushed khushi..to shut hrrself up..is she hvin some disease or smthing?

Abt the update..i bet arnavs already felt her presence..and is gonna gt her bk..in the right place in his arms..:')

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#924

It took me more than a day to get back to normal after reading your chapter 4 and now I could comment.

I started it with lots of anticipation and you didn't fail me in the beginning. The way Arnav greeted Khushi to sending her off to work with a smile and wave was so beautiful it gave us a glimpse of what a love they must have shared. Then you brought out Arnav's craving for his lost love life and how he has failed to notice his crumbling marriage gave me an empathy towards him more than Khushi.

Though it was him who immersed him self in work and had neglected Khushi has brought out the insecurities in her. Though he loves her immensely and admire her for her personality and proud of her he has failed to show it openly and ruined his marriage in the process.

Isn't this the case in most marriages that we take everything for granted after marriage that we fail keep on working to keep it happily successful?

The part that left me with immense sadness was the part that when Khushi saw Arnav with Alisha and when her insecurities and doubts resurfaced. The way you have written it like I felt so heavy and sad as if my own family is suffering there. I couldn't get that scene out of my heart and mind that I wanted it to continue where I wanted Arnav to turn and notice Khushi there and give her all the attention she needed and make sure how happy and proud he was to see her there beside him.

Though I know this story will never end in sadness but its so sad to see such an adoring couple going through such a hard time because they failed to pay attention to the most important thing in their life.

You are an amazing brilliant writer who keeps us bound to your stories by the way you emote each scenes and emotions of the character.

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..ri..

@..ri..

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#925

great update..
feeling sad for arshi..

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#926

Very emotional update..
Khushi is really very insecure.. M tongue tied after reading the update.. The khushi's turmoil, arnav is trying to save the relation.. He should stay away from that alisha... Well lets see wat will happen in next update..!!

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#927

After reading the updates each week I have the tendency to cry... it is always so emotional...

loved the update...

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#928

she is leaving the party.. will arnav be able to see her? dammit why u stop update there jigs... nd who is this alisha man...by any chance is she responsible for khushi's insecurities towards her nd arnav's relationship... oh god its too frustrating... waiting for next chapter.. he btw i didnt find the pole? wht was it about even i wanna vote..