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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

UnRes 😊
Sorry for unresing it so late jigs..
I just read this update..
Wonderful concept. . I haven't read anything like this on forum before and I say it is not easy to handle this kind of stories 👏 👏
Prologue is beautiful. .
Kushi is in so much pain and even arnav..
Looks like they both have communication problem
Kushi is not even liking to be called as raizada.. 😲 I think she is prepared for divorce
But I loved the way arnav responded to the divorce notice 😛 ..
I'm in for this journey of "revealed" with you jigs..
How can I miss a wonderful story written by my wonderful writer ⭐️
Thanx for the pm jigs 😊

Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Jigs 🤗. Amazing prologue and synopsis 👏.

I love this course of revealing the revealed and not to forget I am already crushing on this playful and flirty Arnav and strong Kushi. I also like the choice of professions you picked for A & K 😊

"There was nothing that bound them together anymore, besides a piece of paper"

After reading above line I assume Arnav & Kushi don't have children? It will be interesting to see how troubles started cropping up in their marriage and things got deteriorated to a point they are not even in proper talking terms and Kushi seeking for Divorce and Arnav opposing it.

Eagerly waiting to read the bumpy but successful (????) roller coaster journey of our favorite couple.

Why to restrict your creativity Jigs? I don't mind reading long long update 😉😆

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

That was an amazing start 👏👏👏 I am soo in love with this concept 😊 I am eagerly waiting 2 know what happened b/w arshi that their relation is damaged to this level...ARNAV, my boy..that's the spirit..don't give divorce 2 khushi..let's see what she'll do 😃 but I seriously hope that its arshi's fault together for their strained relation😃 eagerly waiting for the updates 😛 thanku soo much for the pm 😊

P.S: Approx, How many updates does this SS have? And we don't mind if ur update exceeds 5000 words 😃 afterall, we'll be very happy😃 but since its a challenge for u, I am not going plead u for longer updates 😃 tc 😊

Edited by divya_divs - 10 years ago

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wow Awesome Awesome Awesome Di

You are back again

Very excited for this new journey

Haha just 5000 words. If it was me I would have asked for maha update.hehe Very selfish I know

But She must be your well wisher I guess and It will be easier to manage your AD

So Yep We are on for this new ride

Bring it on DI

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

He had walked away yet again, leaving her alone.

I feel this is absolutely opposite to the restraint that Arnav is showing. So ironic that everything about Khushi's law firm screams Arnav - name and design and she is using the same profession to break all ties with him. That creeping smile, fleeting but gives hope. If she can smile even faintly at her husband's eccentricities, there's more than hope. Also, do I see a reversal in characters? KSR has anger and firing employees all the time and trust issues where as Arnav i. The calm, composed and friendly one?

Looking forward to the unraveling of the future and the past.

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Thanks for the PM. 😊
Started to read here, but will continue on the blog.
Will occasionally stop by here.

Great start.
Like the choice of city...another favorite of mine.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Mai bhi yahan hoon ...

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Intersting start. From prologue it seems it's going to be an emotional roller coaster. Waiting for it bring it on. Thx for the PM.

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Welcome back Jigs...

You've started another fab story and I am all excited and happy here...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Jigs is back!! Yay!!! And she is back with a bang!!!! 👏

Relationships are fragile. And most of the times we end up hurting the ones we love the most. Why is it like that??

We take for granted the people who are always there for us and we care not to be as careful with their feelings as we are with people we hardly know.

It takes more time and effort to mend a broken relationship rather than to protect and cherish it.

Jigs, I am so glad that you took up such a sensitive issue as the basis for your next story.

Revealed - Happily ever after just does not happen but couples have to work towards it.

Revealed - Finding love is easy but keeping it is tough. It takes efforts from both sides to keep it growing.

Revealed - Fate throws unexpected unpleasant situations in life, it is in such testing times that the love and understanding and supporting one another becomes the biggest challenge. (I am guessing Khushi and Arnav dont have kids and that is a nagging factor in their relationship now)

Revealed- Problems in relationships occur because each person is concentrating on what is missing in the other person.

Now eagerly waiting to see what Revealed will reveal more about relationships.

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago