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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sman
meee

This is the only one roller coaster I want to ride..

The prologue has captured me totally..am already in love with blue eyed Arnav...

what a storyline Jigs..Architect - Lawyer combination is great..and the story is so non fiction..can happen with anyone we know..amazing..

looks like they dont have kids..may b thats the reason?????
Lavanya is married to Aman with two boys..

loving "Revealed" and YOU..

shillu comment super duper...we have so much to talk about and soo much to debate too...writerji last story there is nothing to debate its a fairytale perfect story...but this one is goint to be one hell of a rollacoster ride...iam on buckle up...prologue is super...

iam on architect side 😛 because i can not take on lawyer side...lawyers are so talkative...

all the best jigs for this new story...

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Loved the prologue... Waiting for the update... Thanks for the pm...!!!

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katy185

@katy185

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

wonderful beginning...

wat an irony..

the sstory is named Revealed but the prologue doesnt reveal anything...hehehehehe...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

i loved it .its interesting ..

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Congratulations Jigs...

The prologue is captivating

The narration is invigorating

The words are free-flowing

The whole thing is amazing

Though the whole thing is amazing

The waiting is going to be killing

The challenge makes one hopping (mad)

The whole thing is tantalizing

Though the whole thing is tantalizing

The best thing is your writing

The journey is going to be revealing

The revealing is going to be breathtaking

I am very very proud of you Jigs for this inspirations and tackling an area of a relationship that leave many baffled...

I may be irregular but I hope you will look past that to know that this is such a proud moment for me to read this prologue for yet another attempt by you...

hippity hip hooray!!!

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maitricuteheart

@maitricuteheart

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Heya welcome back... I must say what a fantastic welcome u have made... nw coming to the story though u r one story old bt ur stories have the capacity to engross people in it... n revealed is going to be one of it... aawesome start... already kept me waiting for more!!!!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

amazing prologue.. kya hua aise ki aisi jagah hain hum pahunce na jee sake na hi mar sake.. loved the prologue.. looking forward to read this interesting story.. Best Wishes and Happy Writing Revealed Jigs 😃

thanks for pm 😊