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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

lovely story...even m a computer artist...hence can relate to your personal situation very well... :)

loved the way you described everything, through his eyes... Khushi is quite forward, agreeing for coffee, n m sure she will travel with him as well...

cant wait to read their travelogue

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

just caught up with this story.

i am amazed by the amount of detail you have portrayed in these two chapter.

its like i know arvan in and out.

different concept.

looking forward to enjoying more of it.

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Every relation needs something more than love to work. It needs complete faith, implicit trust and coming clean in front of your companion and so I really appreciate the way Arnav bared his heart in front of her. By letting her know about the inspiration he has found in her and why exactly would he love to have her travel with him, he has respected her not only as his muse but also as a woman, a woman who deserves respect and admiration.

I love the way she told him about her interest in going with him (in quite clear terms) but the fact that she would still let the orphanage authorities decide for her, leaves me in a complete awe of her maturity and the way she handles them. I cannot wait for this artist and his muse or this beautiful dancer and her inspiration to begin with their journey.

I loved the way you have described the children, them being compared to the free birds seems perfect. Kids, definitely, are those birds who do not deserve to be caged. They should be allowed to take a flight as they please and spend joviality all along the way. His painting depicted the perfect essence of the childhood, of the school days especially. Not just Khushi, even I eagerly look forward to see what this Piper has in store for us.

"A candy is like childhood because you always want to last it a little longer..."

'SwapnaBhoomi' does a complete justice to its name. It indeed is a place where the kids can reside and dare to dream and also work on fulfilling them. Isn't Khushi a likely example of the same? Mr. Vyas is a very mature man. He understood Khushi's need of wanting to be a part of Arnav's journey and hence let her go. At the same time, he did not forget his responsibility towards his little girl and hence ensured to get a background check done. I am glad Arnav could convince Mr. Vyas. Seems when Arnav comes into the picture, charm flows as fluidly as his paints do on the canvas.

It's ironic how a man like Arnav, who has a complete family back home, finds an orphanage homely and warm.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

Song: Mein kya song suggest karoon when you already have one in the end. So it is 'Kisiki muskarahaaton pe ho nisaar'...

Edited by sk2405 - 10 years ago

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dikshita

@dikshitamehta

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Wonderful update dear...

Loved their interactions...

Waiting for their trip!!!!!

Edited by dikshitamehta - 10 years ago

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Khushi ke rangoon se bharpoor res!!!!

Kuch khaniyan lazwaal hoti hain aor unka taluq seedha dil ja jurta hai...HOH aisi hi khubsurat kahani hai...aor Mints ap ke har ek lafz ne mujhe apne seher mein le rakha hai...Loved the Song and the quote you shared in the end, so apt.

Mints, the update was fantastic. Though it was difficult for Arnav to convince the orphanage authorities to send Khushi away with him and it was equally difficult for them to trust Arnav but in the end I am glad they agreed.
Arnav's luck is with him because they were nice people and moreover, they understood him and his perspective. Arnav's interaction with the kids was so sweet.
Khushi is Arnav's inspiration and Mints tell me who is your inspiration. What is the thing that inspires you. Looks like Arnav and Khushi found each other halfs. They are coming close to each other.
I believe this journey will bring together and they will fall in love with each other through their passion for art. Impatiently waiting for the next installment.

Edited by ..RareGem.. - 10 years ago

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

beautifully written😛 loved it😃

Edited by divya_divs - 10 years ago

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Ask me

@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Awesome update

I m waiting for their Rajasthan trip

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zactisdale

@zactisdale

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Beautiful update. What can I say about this Arnav and Khushi. They amaze me. The love for his art and the passion for painting which Arnav has is amazing and how we khushi could relate to his painting of the school. Its rightly said it takes an artist to appreciate art.

Finally their journey is going to begin. Rajasthan it is. Eargely waiting to know how the journey unfolds. Both of them are indeed mutual muse of each other.

Thanks for the pm.