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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Love this story. Like your style as always. You are an incredible writer..👏

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

That was such a beautiful update...

You surprised me with kushi's instant approval on Arnav request... i am sure, kushi wont take Arnav's words in wrong way...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

wow wonderful story! loved both parts.. so arnav have put forth the question will wait to hear khushi's reply..

thanks for pm and sorry for late comments 😊

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Read part yesterday...
BT couldn't comment...
As always awesone...
When I read ur story i keep thinking all day about it...
😛 😛 😛

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Awww...

Our Painter Raizada is totally smitten by our Dancing Doll ..

U made me see literally Khushi dancing before my eyes..

Her graceful dance movements,passion n skill..

Oye hoye..

She's really a smart girl..

She noticed him while watching her 😳

How casually,he asks her out ..

Will it be too much if I ask you out for a coffee after school hours?"

n how sweetly she accepted his offer..

"I will show you around, only if you replace the offer of coffee with piping hot tea."

They r too cute 😃

He doesn't wanna let her go..

He offers her to accompany him to Rajhistan..

Will you be my muse and travel with me to Rajasthan?"

hmmm...

I m sure,she'll take this opportunity..😛

Already waiting for the next update..😃

PS:-

Superb painting !!!!!

Edited by pakpearl - 10 years ago

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

I really like this story! I really got into Arnav's story and his love for painting. The updates flow wonderfully, with an artistic view on all the settings and people. You also paint pretty well, adding highlights and shadows at certain points to make the scene more realistic looking. I hope you continue painting!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

I love the way the story is going. I loved the ay you described Arnav's perspective with respect to khushi in such an artistic manner. Her dance really seemed very pure and artistic with your words.
I was thinking if Khushi really didn't notice Arnav on his first day but she did and did quite well I guess.
Khushi has undoubtedly suffered much and yet she is trying to learn and do what she loves the most without giving up the practical aspect of life. This is both interesting and inspiring.
You know I was wondering how will they get to know each other better given Arnav is here for only few days. But his last question has relieved me of my curiosity in this regard. But I'm still wondering if she will agree easily given that she has to consider her current job also and bot to forget she has just met Arnav.
I have told you before and will repeat - you paint really well and are very creative. Keep up with it :)

Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago