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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Amazing update... I am short of words to appreciate this update.

While every update of this story is awesome, this one surely makes it to top of my list.

N the reason for this is not Arshi this time but the beautiful bonding of the children , Meera and Mohan.

Thanks for the email.

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@xshilohx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Unres'd on Page 68. Because I stayed up that one night for your update and it was probably one of the better choices I've made in life.
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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: xshilohx
Unres'd on Page 68. Because I stayed up that one night for your update and it was probably one of the better choices I've made in life.
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Ah but don't overlook the benefits of a good night's sleep.. :)

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saschades

@saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

beautiful update as always

must be hard for Arnav to raise his child on his own.

thanks x

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Though I haven't commented for some time with too much of work. I never missed to check for your updates.

Loved each and every chapter. The way your talk about Autism its amazing. I have seen many kids with this sickness and the unique talent they poses. One of my sons classmate he is an amazing artist and I always admired his work so natural and very unique. No one will say it was work of an Grade 2 student.

I could see how Arnav struggle to acknowledge it. It's very painful for a parent to watch that his sweet beautiful child cannot be normal like other kids.

I could see Mohan warmed up to Khushi and he is forming a bond with Meera. Meera being the extra ordinarily bright child could bring up a smile on a very reserved kid you have written that part so amazingly.

Love the way Arnav wants Khushi to be open about her feelings and he is not stopping at any cost to point out he is serious about her. Its now in Khushi's hands to accept the second chance or ignore it.

Waiting to see more of what's going to happen in Mathura? Who is going to accompany Mohan?

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

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Read all your update. loved the concept and story and your writing style.

Would love to read more...

Cont soon..

Edited by shubhanjli - 10 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Awesome chapter...Manorama and Sumitra share the same kind of loss...the lossof their children...they could relate and understand each other even though they met just today...they came to know about each other...Thank you for helping see what I still have, just not what I have lost... the hope about the future...loved this part...Meera and Mohan stole the show...Mohan is slowly warming up with Meera...he understood that she was sad by seeing the tears...he understood that she wants him to go with her for the trip...and he wanted to go...showing how he behaved around the crowd...how he flinched with a touch...how he understood Meera...this is going to be interesting going ahead...I would love to see Mohan and Khushi interaction too...she is specialized in treating such kids has raised my expectation...Mohan's behavior has brought happiness and hope to the family...beautifully written part...Arnav and Khushi...I am curious to know about the past...hope Arnav would join them for the trip...thanks for the PM

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Brilliantly written. Hope arnav n mohan wil b able to join dem un der tour... it was cute wen mohan said to take asr half n meera giggling it... children have their own world..

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Jayashree

@JshreeB

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

just loved it ❤️ awesome update 👏 👍🏼

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#490

I loved Manorama and Sumitra's conversation.

It was so well written MB, that I felt as though I was sitting with them going through a whole gamut of emotions. I had to swallow the lump in my throat quite a few times. Loved the part where Mohan proposes to share his Papa with Meera. That was such a sweet touch. And his laughter! One can imagine how the family enjoyed hearing that. Its tough on the parents when their children have a handicap. Its tough to accept and live with. But there is always hope for them. I have an aunt whose only child was spastic at birth. Now he is working and is married and living a normal life. So, it is possible!

Khushi sent away Arnav the first time they met? Why?

Hope Arnav doesn't give up this time and follows her to Mathura.

I think the next chapter will take us into the past and we'll get a glimpse of a younger Khushi and Arnav and their relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter.