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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: Sakhi2013
Nice update
Both need more word then silence ... Really wonderful update...

Mira you are also one of best writer ...

I like Mohan's character ... Too innocent ...

Please PM me when you update ...

👏👏👏

Thank you so much.

If you pm me your email address I will send you an update notification. I don't like sending PMs.. please?

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

nice chapter...

wow iam so in love with meera, that little girl has soo much maturity, like their conversation between meera and mohan...mohan is soo cute and innocent...

arnav is very happy and surprised to see how his son's responding...arnav is happy so iam 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...

last line tell me that past is coming soon😛😛😛😛😛...

thanks for the lovely chapter...

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laksh65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

very interesting update, khushi is in denial mode but not able to conceal her feelings

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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

U r one gifted writer dear...

Absolutely marvelous...

Awesome update...

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docs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Happy autism day. You have brought to life the real struggles of parents with autistic children . they need our support more than anything else. I really wish we lived in a society where there are no comparisons done among children. Its worse when they sit and compare a 2-3day old child as well. And its even more tough to keep your mouth shut and not answer back to avoid more unpleasant situations . its these comparisons which I feel hinder the children's growth normal ones or kids with special attention n needs...

This story has myriad of layers there is mohan Nani manorama Meera khushi arnav Maya everyone is an integral part to this story n you have given all of them equal importance.waiting for more of your story...

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thephoenixenigm

@thephoenixenigm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Loved it!!

Mohan and meera are so adorable and its true sharing pain helps you cross bridges the sharing of ASR and the late night texting. So can we expect them in mathura and Agra ??!!

You are one amazing writer I love the way you write.

Love,

Sum.

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Sumitra Raizada is a very strong woman not only because she endured so much during her life...she lost a husband, a daughter, son-in-law and at a very mature age all alone had to take care of a teen and preteen kids...she is strong cause she is hopeful and positive even after life threw so much at her. She has a big heart to empathize with Manorama and welcome them in her home and heart this easily...when life throws bad things at you...the common thing is, it makes a good person bitter. It takes lot of strength to believe in goodness and stay positive when life has taken so much away...

I can understand Khushi's reluctance...it is hard for her to let go of NK s memories and replace him in her life in some way...her decision can affect Meera...what would she tell her and also her duty as daughter in law...and especially after Manorama was so good to her, and supported her, loved her...she has to think what would that relation be? It is hard for her...love it is so complicated...and now it is with so many other duties and equation she has to work out...I feel for her...

Mathura...hopefully God will show her the way...

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meera30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

To write a child-character who you can root for is a tough task; To write two child-characters who you absolutely adore is even more difficult. To make one of them suffer a difficult life situation such as autism/Asperger's and doing that with sensitivity and a liberal dose of realism is an achievement reserved for the greats. I have so far refrained from commenting on either Meera or Mohan because what child would be anything but loving and adorable with their openness and fresh perspective. But after this update I can easily say that almost 9 year old Meera and the no-so-little 6 year old Mohan who is willing to share half his father with her, are hands-down the most endearing children I have ever read about. Meera and Mohan are linked in so many ways - and one of those is infact a divine connection - what can I say - it is right there!

When I read this story - I almost wish this had not been an Arnav-Khushi story (just given how wonderfully you have balanced every single character). And then I ask myself - what difference would that make?

None at all! None at all, my friend.

Oh and I have genuinely (and you and everybody else has only my word for this) have NEVER believed my writing is anything but average. But if someone who writes THIS story says she was inspired by me (you don't know how difficult it is to even write it!), I must be okay. :) Thank you - they are small words but please transform them into eloquence- the Mirabell way- in your head to understand just how much I mean it! :):)