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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Nice lighthearted chapter. Funniest parts were splitting ASR in half (in which case I definitely want a piece 😳) and Khushi's thoughts about Khailash 😆. I'm trying to imagine his looks.
The bonding between Meera and Mohan as well as Manorama and Deviyani are very sweet. I think that will play a big roll as to what happens between Arnav and Khushi. I want their picture with the kids on that empty nail on the wall.
Arnav wasn't joking when he said that he won't let Khushi ignore this thing between them. He's definitely pushing her to respond to him. I hope he decides to come along instead of Maya. Amazing update as always. I don't know how you evoke such intense emotions with such simplicity

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nitrit95

@nitrit95

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

too good too good no words to express so 👏👍🏼🤗thk u update soon pls

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Love the story, getting more and more curious about Arnav's ex-wife and why they got divorced

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

This chapter was so damn good...!!!
w8ng for next!!

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sweety421

@sweety421

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Wonderful update dear... I juz hope Khushi won't let him go this time...
I love meera and mohan. ...
Superb writing...Waiting to read more...

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maina23

@maina23

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Very lighthearted update.

Will be back to update more.

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Armela

@Armela

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

The interaction between Meera and Mohan was beautiful

Edited by Armela - 10 years ago

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niza fazal

@nizahairu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Lovely update
Interaction between meera and mohan is very gud

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Hey MB,

Second chances started gripping my attention from chapter 3 or so...and with each update, the writing style improves, captures, demands, commands my love...Of course my initial reservations was because there was a loss of a dearly loved one...I am a very emotional person (i feel so deeply for fictional characters too) Hence I wasn't sure should I go on reading or not...but then the title "Second chances" is too important for me to ignore.You didn't disappoint me. In fact with each passing update my admiration for your story telling ability is increasing...

You have crafted the scene at Raizada home very beautifully...especially the interaction of those two children...it was warm and touching...And Khushi -Arnav, whatever was the past, it cant be forgotten or put aside...when you suppress it comes back more forcefully...I think Khushi would have to deal with it...Arnav is already determined...I suggest he has that kind of strong determination in Mohan's future too. Of course, when there is someone to share such an emotional pressure, his will be able to make peace with it than bearing it all alone...

Khushi is very much a normal girl, with fears, insecurities and yearning...Her fear to take risk is very realistic...As you rightly said some people are skeptical about new relationships, new beginnings...it takes a lot for them to deal such challenges...I hope their travel together would be a good beginning...

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#450

Beautiful beautiful update Mira!! I wish I were a writer too to be able to express how beautiful these stories that you guys write are!! You and all the people you thanked!! You have become a part of my life and I am not even sure if you guys know how much I appreciate all of your work. So basically thanks for giving us such wonderful stories.