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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Khushi and Arnav... One still uncertain and the other certain... Both have the blessings of the elders...

Mohan is an autistic child! No wonder Sumitra is worried...

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ranogill

@ranogill

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

what a wonderful update... i just love this build up to their relationship...awesome

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#233

beautiful update one again

I feel both Mohan and Meera will come together and make a great friendship.

hope things work out for both Arnav and Khushi

thanks xx

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Sorry but a tad disappointed with tis update. No progress in the plot, nothing new. Felt more like a filler to me. Sorry if I offended u with this rude comment. It was purely my personal opinion compared to previous chapters.

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Justme1

@Justme1

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Beautiful story so far. So many emotions flowing through the words and so real to life at that. Read all the chapters in 1 go. Waiting read more.

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meinfrau14

@meinfrau14

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

i absolutely love how the story is unfolding ! great job :)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

what do I say about this update MB

each and every update of yours shows what a fantastic writer you are - its a pity that you have started writing so late - you have wasted some of your precious time MB -

your talent has to be recognized and applauded - you have a great future ahead -

keep going MB

coming to our update, Nani and manorama have stolen the limelight. I don't think we can ever find a MIL like manorama - what a character dear - hats off to that character -

Sumitra Raizada's concern about arnav's happiness is truly well depicted - I was touched with her thoughts and feelings - a great Nani indeed

Arnav's suffering and his pain has been very well portrayed through Nani's POV - I really pity him - he definitely deserves a second chance and our darling Khushi who is totally confused about her feelings for arnav, definitely deserves a second chance tooo -

From what i have read about NK, Manorama and Meera, Iam sure they will, whole heartedly, definitely support Khushi in her decisions

will wait for the 10 days to pass by - will keep counting the remaining days

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Well MB, I was not very patient. Now was I supportive.

In fact I cribbed and cribbed about the late update. 😉

And now I want you to keep our date.

Please don't take two weeks to update.😡😆

We plant a tree in our garden.

Sometimes it dies inthe harsh winter.

But when spring arrives, it sprouts agzin.

Khushi and Arnav's relationship is like that plant.

That love for each other which had maybe died down with the passage of time, has sprouted again in their hearts. However much Khushi tries to deny it, Arnav is making a place for himself in her heart.

Manorama seems to have realised that. Wonder when Khushi will do so.

I'm waiting eagerly for Khushi to visit Shantivan.

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

unresed

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120492608

Edited by kanthi_chks - 10 years ago

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#240

The minute u wrote about Mohan initially , I knew it had to be autism... This update is close to my heart ...very close... I knew why u made Arnav and meera' s bond so special ,in a special way... I know the feeling.. I guess I know now why I was having some kind of a emotional yet special bond with this story...did I mention I look forward to Saturdays more now a days ...u write beautifully