ARSHI/OS: A New Beginning with Curator...Marriage Special - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Wat a lovely os..Touched my heart ❤️
Thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Faiqa, 👏
sach main, dil se likha hai ,pata lagta hai⭐️

too good, you have no idea ,your words describing the intensity of ASR's pain ,just too good.I lost my words for it.A totally new idea but the way she brought the GREAT ASR on his knees and then announces her punishment, I can imagine his face , his emotions, his melting heart who will be losing all control in this wish to hold his woman forever in his arms right next to his heart where she has TOUCHED so strongly and permanently.

Love It.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Dear Faiqa 🤗
Their painful love turns into a soothing love when they never knew. 😳
As I said before!!
Love is most beautiful with anguish!!
life states love and anguish is another expression of love!!
They are inseparable like Arnav-Khushi!
You I did not watch that serial but in your stories I can feel them.
One song is now in my mind 😳

Ishare bhi chup hain
Zubaan khaamosh hai
Sadaa gumsum si hai
Tanha aagosh hai..
Yaara re, yaara re..
Kyun faaslon mein bhi tu yaara re...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
marvellous joueney
of thatstormy night
and temple marriage of arshi
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Great one Faiqu⭐️👏 Absolutely loved it!
You have turned Shyam into Khushis benefactor, like a brother! He he! Jiyo Faiqu jiyo!
After reading your OS I felt all evil in the world has vanished and there is only love and peace even in mirchiwala khana and sweet syrupy jalebis😆
It was lovely to read your analysis of the episode again. You have enriched the Arshi world wherever you have touched it!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Thank you everyone for your sweet comments.
I will respond back soon...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Nice OS. I love the changes leading to a happy ending.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Lovely os with different way on terrace scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Really Nice 👏 OS

The start is gripping and ambiance is compelling.That night was a stormy night itself.The storm in their hearts , especially in his heart had endless pain, from his Di, from getting betrayed by his love.The girl he opened up only .

I like the way you have changed the original .Shyam is NICE in your world😆 that is new to me.He is special character.Nice change.👏

Love the ending.Khushi is always forgiving but wait a minute, she is going to make him eat Mirchi as a punishment, 😊 but he deserves more than that.How can he avert from her innocence .

Cute😊 Love it❤️


Thnx Roop😊

yes ...hehe.. I made him nicer for once..miracle do happen ...have some belief Ladki...😆

Thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Alicia2012

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story


Thnx Alicia , glad u liked it😊

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