ARSHI/OS: A New Beginning with Curator...Marriage Special

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

This was so INTENSE Faiqa...

Starting with you metaphor for *locked her heart to locker her within walls*. You have truly captured all of Khushi's emotions very very beautifully!

And she locked the doors! That was brilliant. It shows the true fighting spirits of Khushi Kumari Gupta like she had while in the first few episodes of IPKKND...

And let me not even start about Arnav's emotions now...here I got to see a broken brother as well as a jealous lover! And then he transformed into the kid who had lost his mother at a young age...nothing mattered to him at the moment he broke the glass door, whilst wishing for Khushi to be alive and safe!

And then the moment of confession...yet another surprise from you!

Loved khushi's banter on the punishments she intended to give her Arnavji...dare he leave her!

All in all a very intense, romantic and positive OS!

Sorry for the delay in commenting...my laptop has been causing touble since a week now...have given it for repair..lol

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Awesome OS
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Rrpdxb

@Rrpdxb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Beautifully written 😳.

Asr and kushi Hamesha in their choti SI Duniya 😳, u have turned Shyam as kushis sakha 😆.

Pls add me into your pm list ,

Looking forward to your next update.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

awesome update 😳

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aimmy

@Aims.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Awesome👏

loved reading it

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

It is amazing, dear

Thanks for your pm

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Astha

@paraprosdokian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

if possible pm me whenever u write another Os or ff

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Ee ka? Shyam babua to Shyam bhaiyya nikle! 😲 😆

Loved the story Faiqa. In one night from hate to love, bringing together all important moments of Arshi, wah. 👏 I love the colour used throughout, for the text and gifs, cobalt blue, isn't it? One of my fav shades of blue. 😳 Great job on the visuals Faiqa. ⭐️ I actually didn't want to hit post reply button, but wanted to keep staring. 😃

Chalo, I've made a start in reading. Now hoping I stick to it and crawl my way back. Thanks for this OS Faiqa. Enjoyed reading. 😊