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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#841

Arnav put out quit a show!! lol
Akash ... couldn't you come up with anyother name yaar!!! why sheetal?? this name just gives me a bad vibe ...

p.s- hope u r doing well dear.. get well soon... 🤗

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#842

yayeee!! bahut hi badiya!! 👏

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

wow wat a fantastic part 2...

so arnav finally apologized... haha is he J of akash???

n did he really pick khushi up in his arms and save her...oh the knight in no shining armor 😛

loved the convo btw arshi... and the attraction they feel for each other..

oh n Akash...way to go 😛

lovely update...

Hope u r feeling better..

eagerly waiting for the next!!

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aaee

@aaee

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#844

Great part 2 sandhya. Loved A & K lovely interlude. The rational Arnav surfacing and apologizing for his behavior. A kind wonderful friend Akash showing his naughty side. Finall seeing our two main stars slowly finding their right path.

I am ready with a cup of coffee, some munchies for the next update. Sandhya let it begin!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

So Arnav came through or rather his innate goodness did- once he allowed his anger and the tornedo created by his mother abate. I am glad he had the honesty to apologise once his anger had subsided and he realized that he was way out of line..

Yes Arnav and Khushi are attracted to each other, Arnav perhaps more than Khushi. But two people together is not just about them. It is also about their families and their circumstances because whether we like it or not, that's the way we are! Our social fabric, our familial support forms an integral and important part of our lives and we cannot run away from it. Also Khushi needs to explore the little attraction that she feels for Arnav - is it tinged by the fact that her mind, it is, in essence a forbidden fruit? Something unattainable yet something that brings her closer to her lost friend?

Loved the fact that Arnav couldn't stand the thought of her having to go through another showdown with his mother. His mother she may be, Arnav is objective enough to realize his mother for what she is - a bully - without attaching any judgement to it. That's what children do, even for difficult mothers like Asha.

I think I am slightly bizzarre... I thought the second part of the update was incredibly romantic! I don't know about Arnav and Khushi, but I am def in love with this story!

You know it reminded me of DND - I wish you would post ti somewhere or on a blog. Would love to read it again!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 10 years ago

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rlaks

@rlaks

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Loved it !! The way Arnav comes to protect them from his mother &the story by Aakash were nice .

Looks like sparks started flying . So now as Khushi is going to remember Arnav 😉 expect more scenes of meeting between them !!

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Tomandjerry

@Tomandjerry

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Beautifully written... the best part was knowing that Arnav realiesed his mistake and wants to make things right with Khushi.

Going forward it will be nice to see how Khushi reacts to Arnav, knowing that he is seeing Sheetal.

And Aakash it just a true friend..love the friendship he shares with Khushi.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Nice...very very nice...

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#849

It was absolutely adorable the way the two brothers "protected" Khushi from being confronted by their mother. It may be that they didn't want a scene at the club, but they were also protecting Khushi.

Akash's story was sad and it must have been painful for him to talk about it again and wait for Khushi's reaction. Clearly, he is relieved at her easy acceptance about his part in it and her trust in him. And he trusted her when she told him that she was journalist - they are true friends!

So Arnav was upset only because Khushi did not tell him who she was and what she did and not so much that she was a journalist. Interesting :-), and Khushi accepted his sincere apology.

I know you have the story planned out, but since Anjali's disappearance still seems to be a mystery, I hope that Khushi, Arnav and Akash team up and use Khushi's investigative journalist's skills and unravel the mystery. I have always felt that Arnav and Khushi doing something together would be so good! They are so different but could very easily complement each other too!