~ArHi FF~#2~The Hands of Time~

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anju

@anjusr06

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#621

Awesome update... akki nd kuku loved it

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anukap

@anukap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#622

Super progression. Like this Akki and that khushi and he have picked up the threads even after so many years and so much that has happened for no fault of theirs. Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out more, and uncover another layer. You tell a great story, keep it coming.

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#623

As I read through the chapter all i could think of is the song ...Jaane Kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai toh I'll be alright"... i felt so glad that khushi and akash both in need of a friend got one back.

The update gave some insight into Arnav's outburst. So far it seems that Arnav has been the anchor in the storm surrounding this family. Akash has suffered in his own way and now again with his broken relationships suffered more..Arnav it seems has had to be the stronger one trying to hold on to sanity...one thing is clear irrespective of what their mother thinks about khushi the brothers have shown great maturity in not blaming her...

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#624

Superbly awesome update dear!!! The meeting between old friends was really good... Looking forward to read the next part:-))

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shr1234

@shr1234

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#625

Brilliant update Sandhya :)

Akash really surprised me. Contrary to the broken, drunken man he was earlier, he was rational here. It seemed he has accepted the absence of his twin better than other Raizadas. His brokenness shows though, the indecisiveness or low confidence... His encounter with Lavanya was funny. I love and understand her. Loved the way the two friends talked heart to heart, it will surely bring them some peace. Loved the chapter :)

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#626

Seriously it was an awesome update... I love Lavanya character here...

Even I love the fact that akash came to meet his old friend.. I love khushi & akash bonding... you wrote it beautifully dear...

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#627

At last I finished reading all the chapters and just love the way story is unfolding and your description of places, hills, trials, flowers, greenery and everything. Yes, suspense angle is keeping us all on edge want to know the end 😆. I still remember DND days how we all went haywire with innumerable options to solve the lady in prologue puzzle and HOT prologue is no less. But I will wait for the story to unfold in its course because I want this tory to continue for a long time.

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#628

What a beautiful friendship they share. Glad they got each other now.

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#629

beautiful update

thanks for pm x

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mpat

@mpat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#630

Delightful chapter!!
So happy that Khushi and Akash rekindled their friendship and am looking forward to their "bucket list" trips.
I can picture a fuming Arnav. 😃
Same for Lavanya in this story...liking her and her protective nature for Khushi.

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