~ArHi FF~#2~The Hands of Time~

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ipkkndkasr

@ipkkndkasr

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Awesome update.👏

Eagerly waiting for next chapter.

Please don't delay the next chapter.😳

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

What ever I could even think of writing as a comment, that and even more and that too in better words ...meera30 has written it...

So I am keeping my mouth shut...

Sandhya 👏👏 Chapter and the flow of the story can't be better than this...

And to meera🤗. All I can say is wow...

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

I am really liking Madhu Atha here. They don't live in a feudal system where the Raizada's are rulers. Arnav just wants to hurt Khushi by throwing insults at her. But there is an internal fight between his heart and mind going on but as usual his mind is winning.

Thanks for the update and PM.

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

I am not good with words but Madhu has said the exact same words to Khushi which i was thinking all the while! She has showed her something which is technically true and that definitely made things better for Khushi! Khushi was running like before and Madhu showed her mirror and pushed her to fight and i love that conversation, very well written part Sandhya 👏.

Now to the part 2 of this chapter, everyone has different way to handle situation and everyone has completely different coping mechanism to his or her problems/tragedy. For Arnav today i felt like offense is the best way to defend himself in the situation he was in! The attraction he felt toward her and the aftermath of revelation and destruction at home followed by his investigation about Khushi, he needed answers and he was here for that.

While khushi has decided not to defend herself at all and went completely silent..Both are attracted to each other and in this situation also they felt it!!

I think both let their guards down at the end and I hope khushi can explain her side of story and Arnav would listen to her !!!

With every chapter, your writing is becoming more and more intense and that's the requirement of this story and i am loving it 😊. Fabulous chapter as always 👏

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Beautiful update! Loved it to bits! Thanks for the pm.

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

just amazing its seems I was lost in the web of your writting

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

I really feel bad for Khushi. I think there is more to the flashback.

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Wow Sandhya, your writing is truely amazing! Right from the start where she is trying to overcome her feelings regarding Arthi, and the sudden coldness of Arnav. I dont think she knew who he was when she fell, or did she? As the Raizada heir to Riaz teas maybe she came across is picture as a journalist. Im more intrigued by Arti and Pathi reltionship...something obvioulsly os askew as the two girls played together before the tragedy, the families must have known each other before very well. Interesting..

the there is Madhus story will we get an insight, is madhus life somehow embroiled in all this?

So here we have Arnav jumping in with his thoughts about sonething without thinking, accusing her when all be really wants to do is.. well we all know what he wants to do..😉
Im glad she didnt blow up on hi and then say something aweful. But the sparks are there, so maybe theh will do ehat her book is supposed to do, investigate a murder and in the meantime lots of stolen looks etc,

looking forward go ghd next chapter

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

I am big fan of Madhu. She is one brave lady. Khushi take some lessons from her.

I am like when women are portrayed as strong and firm, and I am really loving this Madhu's character a lot. I loved the way she gave Khushi the required strength to face the situation.

I guess there is a flashback between Shashi and Aarti, will wait to know more about it.

Wow never thought Arnav would barge in like this right into Khushi's house and demands answers.

I have a few questions for him too.

Why does it bother him so much whether Khushi was purposefully following him or not?

Why does he want to know what she has studied or what she is doing?

Does he really believe that Khushi would write about Anjali's kidnapping as a book?

Why is he so frustrated that he got attracted to Khushi in the first place?

He could just forget her and move on, instead why is he demanding answers from her?

I think if Arnav asks himself the answers, he would know what his heart wants.

Nice intense scene between Arnav and Khushi.

Lavanya was cute in the update.

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

Really enjoy the update!!! And I just loved the bond between the three woman, khshi with her aunt and grandma, they are so supportive and understanding towards her esp. her aunt.

Arnav I didn't expect better of him not that he will go ahead pursue khushi after knowing who she is and what connection the share. But what strike me so hard is how the raizada think alike. We'll mostly Arnav n his mother, how possibly a eight yearold khushi can be responsible for anjali disappearance? What give them the idea that she is responsible?

I really wanna know how a woman like arti raizada help shahi gupta, she never seems to like ppl from lower status. So why did she help shashi? Arti has the kind of personality that I distaste. She seems too proud and school herself into a control freak. I may be wrong abt her but from what I read abt her, she doesn't seems to be someone ease or affectionate or someone u can share ur feeling with nor warmth.

And khushi really needs to be in control of her life and what more does she need when she has her aunt n grandma so supportive. And the power of her words, she can really do some damage and clear the name of her family and mostly hers!!!

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