~ArHi FF~#2~The Hands of Time~

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cineraria

@cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

Roomaal picked from here.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120010962

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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

awesome update dear...

the interaction between arshi was portrayed very well...

Too many emotions are being controlled and both couldn't find a common ground to clear the air...

From arnav's behavior i could sense that he is not able to digest the fact that how he missed out recongnising KHUSHI...

waiting to read more...

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

awesome. ..loved the update...can't wait to read next. ..

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#394

That was wonderful update...

I really feel sad for kushi, poor girl she didnt do anything but subjected for such a big accusation... i really hope she stay strong and prove herself...

I cant understand Arnav, he was angry on kushi but he dont want her to here in nilgiri and get hurt by his mother...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Oh sandhya, I can't believe I missed ur pm for chapter 4 - iam so sorry - I have 2 chapters to catch up -

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#396

That was seriously awesome update... Love khushi and her aunt conversation.. m glad she is staying not running away... But the 2nd part is intense, love their confrontation... Eagerly waitng 2 know about Anjali mysterious disappearance...

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#397

very emotional update
loved the conversation between Madhu and khushi..
what jaya is hiding from khushi?
who is lavanya?
is she related to khushi?
why did Arnav came to meet khushi?

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Glad her atha and paati made Khushi stay. I just love these strong and pragmatic ladies. But Arnav's reaction stumps me, I thought he might be more controlled, rational. I mean he had time to gather a file on her, seems he thought a bit too, then why this eruption? And who was that moustached man on the train? Bring the next one jaldi, jaldi :)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#399

Great chapter!

The first part was awesome and there is nothing more that I can say except that I love Madhu and Khushi is lucky to have in her life..I wonder what is the history between Paati and the Raizadas especially Aarti.

Second part was intense..Never thought that Arnav would show up at Khusi's place..wonder if he knew that Khushi's paati and aunt were not at home.The accusations made by Arnav were baseless.I am sure that even Arnav knows that his words were wrong and pointless.I think he is trying to prove Aarti (or probably himself) that he has not tainted Anjali's memories.I think he was just looking for a reason to see Khushi.

I am sure deep down even Arnav knows that Khushi is not be blamed for Anjali's disappearance.But the question is why would he say all that to her..I must say that he really took the efforts to know about Khushi to accuse that she is writing a book on Anjali...Also he seems to dislike jornalists in general..looks like there is story behind that.

Khushi.Can't help feel sad for her.First the mother and then the son..what a way to start and end your day.I just she does not crumble after all this.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#400

The first part was amazing. The bond between Khushi and her aunt was so well written. I am really looking forward to read more on that.

Aarti, on the other hand, needs help. While I can't even begin to imagine how hard it would be for a mother to suddenly lose her eight year old daughter, but she definitely needs some help to come to terms with all of that. However, I don't see how she can blame another 8 year old for what happened with her daughter. But then, we have not yet read about the details of what happened after Anjali disappeared...

However, Arnav has really disappointed and surprised me. The way he came to Khushi and behaved with her is neither civil nor normal. And from what I have read so far about his character, he didn't seem like someone who needs help. In fact, he had come across as someone who is reasonable and level-headed. But after reading the second part of this chapter, I am really confused about his character. Please don't take this as a criticism. I love your writing and am just expressing my confusion here. So please don't take any offense. 😊

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