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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome Updates.

1st one

Shyam is gay...didn't see that coming and he likes Khushi's brother. LOL. Khushi is awesome for supporting her brother and husband. Loved Arnav as usual

2nd one.

Arnav loved her all along. Awesome Story. The ending was awesome.

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
Beautiful stories
Loved them
Both of them are just awesome
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much Twinkle...

and thanks for liking my work...

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Spoonai
Both story are amzing and it was fun reading it. It was much entertaining too. But there is always one u like better than the other and for me, I loved the first one. "Take her and keep her", I loved it very much and it was hilarious to find out that Shyam is gay!!! Lol, I nearly jump out my seat. I love the conversation between arshi and Arnav condition was too much to handle.

Coming to the second story, it was entertaining but not my kind of story. I really never like reading such story. But with an exception, I kinda enjoy it somewhat and I'm hoping it doesn't get more complicated.
Amzing piece of writing and I'm looking forward for more :)

Thank you so much dear, and thank you for taking a leap for my story, which was not even on your liking, and then enjoying it too, So, what even a little the main part was you had enjoyed it.. which was great...

Yeah Take her and keep her was like it just bust into my head, but i surely didn't able to write what i wanted to write, it came out different then I had expected, nevertheless it was good one..

Dream and reality was like cat and mouse.. 😆😆

sometimes we can't handle our own self, i will just say that only.. I furious pain in my head while writing it, and i have to write it down in one time, almost 5 hours it took me.. editing, deleting, editing...

I thou don't understand how other write directly on Forum and post it in half and hour or less...

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Both of the stories were amazing...superb
loved reading it... really fun and enjoyable

Thank you so much dear, but i guess only few patron have enjoyed it... Not much i guess.. 😉😉

Thanks for writing your thoughts thou... 😊

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: pran28671
Both stories are fabulous

Originally posted by: pup03
mind blowing shots! loved both of them.. love ARSHI and such awesome stories... 😃

thanks for pm 😊

Thank you both of you... Thanks for commenting and moreover Thank you for enjoying it and well Enjoying i guess...😆😆

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: navjot7
take her and keep her
its mindblowing
so shyam is with khushi brother
i never imagine something like this will come
and arnav is at khushi door to win her
dream and reality
arnav love her yipi
awesome ending
thnx for pm

what can I say, you never know what story will turn as me a writer... 🤣🤣

isn't it good sometimes...😳

of course He Loves her, whom else would he love if not her... 😆😆

And Thanks dear for writing your thoughts too... 👏👏

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada
Awesome Updates.

1st one

Shyam is gay...didn't see that coming and he likes Khushi's brother. LOL. Khushi is awesome for supporting her brother and husband. Loved Arnav as usual

2nd one.

Arnav loved her all along. Awesome Story. The ending was awesome.

Okay no big words for me, but gal, can you blame me for my awesomeness...? huh...

I can turn anyone in a gay and then straight, coz I am crazy, When people use to tell me before, it made me sad😭😭 but Now, I fell Proud of my craziness... 😆😆

Thanks for liking it thou...

But I guess I am in gay zone right now, First Sheetal and Payal and now Shyam, damn Will it turn me into gay too?? 😕😕

and for the second one, Please tell me what you liked the most?

1.. you liked the ending coz he was naked or

2.. you liked the ending coz it was crazy?

3.. or you liked the ending coz he loved her all along??

4.. or in short I was the writer??

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ShiningHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Amazing Shots!

Loved both of them😃

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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sarangnunmul

Okay no big words for me, but gal, can you blame me for my awesomeness...? huh...
I can turn anyone in a gay and then straight, coz I am crazy, When people use to tell me before, it made me sad😭😭 but Now, I fell Proud of my craziness... 😆😆
Thanks for liking it thou...
But I guess I am in gay zone right now, First Sheetal and Payal and now Shyam, damn Will it turn me into gay too?? 😕😕

and for the second one, Please tell me what you liked the most?
1.. you liked the ending coz he was naked or
2.. you liked the ending coz it was crazy?
3.. or you liked the ending coz he loved her all along??
4.. or in short I was the writer??