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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sarangnunmul

Sure guys will update soon.. First one is complete but didn't got time for proof reading and for second one it is in middle or less i guess, didn't get time to write much... Sorry guys...
Today I should be updating as Valentine day, but I am so sorry for the delay... But tomorrow Paka... Again if able to complete it... 😔

No worry dear...
Take ur own time...
Will be waiting for it...
😊

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Both the stories are fabulous
But I liked the first one more
Plz update soon

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
Both the stories are fabulous
But I liked the first one more
Plz update soon

Thank you girl... Thanks for liking it and the update is on the way too...

And please comment again and tell me how you feel for both and which one is more interesting than another...

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Beautiful stories
Loved them
Both of them are just awesome
Thanks for the pm

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Both story are amzing and it was fun reading it. It was much entertaining too. But there is always one u like better than the other and for me, I loved the first one. "Take her and keep her", I loved it very much and it was hilarious to find out that Shyam is gay!!! Lol, I nearly jump out my seat. I love the conversation between arshi and Arnav condition was too much to handle.

Coming to the second story, it was entertaining but not my kind of story. I really never like reading such story. But with an exception, I kinda enjoy it somewhat and I'm hoping it doesn't get more complicated.
Amzing piece of writing and I'm looking forward for more :)

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Both of the stories were amazing...superb
loved reading it... really fun and enjoyable

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

mind blowing shots! loved both of them.. love ARSHI and such awesome stories... 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

take her and keep her
its mindblowing
so shyam is with khushi brother
i never imagine something like this will come
and arnav is at khushi door to win her
dream and reality
arnav love her yipi
awesome ending
thnx for pm