ArHi TS: Tangled *Final part updated* 03/03/15 Pg20

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Khushi loves Arnav, was about to marry Shyam and trying to elope with NK😕. She sure is sanka devi. It was so much fun reading her plan A, A1 and B.😆.

Arnav loved Khushi, NK loved Lavanya and Shyam -anjali. A perfect title for this short, sweet story. Is there another part for this TS?

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Aqua, Read both in one go...

First I was like this (: Shyam and the groom...and the best buddy of Arnav 😲

Then He arrived in his shinning armored suit...

Cute and our Sanka said to him I LUB U while he was almost behosh...😆

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

What a romantic ending this was.
Beautiful.

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

superb... 👏

loved the crazy khushi...

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

wow! superb part...

arshi loves each other...

anjali and shyam together...

arshi going to get marry...

update soon...

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raws

@raws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

oh god was smiling like carzy

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Mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Aayat, this was one funny, crazy, hilarious, cute and adorable TS. The characters and Khushi's quirkiness is what makes it so special. Loved how you created this illusion of Arnav being Khushi's fiance, who she is not ready to get married to. Then in kahani main twist, NK comes into the picture of being Khushi's best friend. Here I thought of Jab We Met, how geet tries to use another guy to slink off from an impending marriage. But you gave us a bummer... with Khushi hitting Arnav in the head and revealing that Shyam was the guy she was engaged to.

Now she is in love with Arnav and Shyam is in love with someone else. So finally, after a crazy fiasco of revelations... Arnav comes as a night in shining armour, saving the damsel in distress... who was actually in distress at her failed attempts to run away from the wedding. This was a truly hilarious story and had me in splits throughout. I would mind seeing another part, that consists of only Arnav, Khushi and her quirkiness... Keep writing more Aayat... we love reading your stories.

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Thanks for the pm

Awesome

Funny crazy TS.

Poor Arnav got hit by a bat no less.

He still wants to marry this crazy girl he has certainly lost his mind.

All the drama was really hilarious.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

This was such a delightfully fun read. A fitting, zany happening in the life of for our 'sankadevi'! You totally had me in the first part, convinced that it was Arnav she was to marry. I loved your take on alarm clocks, the bane of our existence!

I'm so glad Mints persuaded you to post it :)