Arshi FF: Like Never Before #3 - Thread 4 added(26.04.15)

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

I always gt imotional aftr reading evry updt
The way u describe arnav imotions n child nightmare its outstanding
Only khushi can heal arnav
I wondr hw arnav deal with himself in khushi absence
Updt soon dear
Tanx for pm
Sry nwdays i cant comnt regularly becoz of busy schedule

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#772

And with their little pav bhaji treat, they crossed another milestone together. Not only did he relive his last memory with Akash but also took a step towards welcoming all such pleasant moments from the past with wide open arms and a content heart. He, infact, gave his old self a freedom from all the self-restricted chains to enjoy these stolen moments with his ever supporting wife.

There will definitely be moments of self-doubt and compulsive vulnerability that will grip their present with a tight whiplash but it will simply be the presence of other that will help them rejuvenate their lost selves. Just like her hapiness has become his topmost priority, helping him fight his nightmares has become an important motto for her. The important condition being opening up and expressing their fears (she made it sure he opens up to her with that very seductive move), there shouldn't be anything stopping them from embracing all the fears ever.

5 days away from each other is going to be the most pathetic thing for them and I am not sure how they will deal with their temporary separation. I hope you bring in some miracle and make those 5 days fly away in a jiffy. It's pretty discerning seeing them part their ways, although temporarily.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#773

one more hurdle crossed... arnav is able to eat pavbaji... poor guy got a doubt if his wife is happy with him:-))

tht nightmare from his childhood incident is so scary... how wud such a small boy survive such thing...

what are his parents made of😡... will his mom atleast now realize what she missed..

am worrying how these two are going to survive for one week without each other...

true that they have to travel individually for their wrk, will they find a permanent solution or compromise their works

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Pinky_b

@Pinky_b

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#774

Hello Chaverah, thanks for yet another amazing chapter. Firstly, thank you for acknowledging your readers and their comments. It truly feels good to know that the writer values each readers comments, takes time out of her busy schedule to write a word or two on the comments shared by the reader. Thanks for that. Coming to the update, I don't know from where to start. Khushi always amazes me and your characterisation & visualisation of such a strong character your truly commendable. khushi, in spite of having such a terrible past, fighting her inner demons, having so much of baggage, wants to be strong for her husband..wants to take away his pain pushing aside her pain, she wants to fight against all the people who have caused so much pain to her husband. I guess, she and arnav are two awe inspiring couples, doing everything and anything under their control to make the other one happy. I still can't get over her words and behaviour the previous night and not to mention an underlying treat to the lady daring her to try hurting her husband again. I'm glad that arnav is opening up to khushi and in no time, with his angel & friends beside him, he will be healed for sure. There is so much of pain and agony, he has endeavoured so much in the past and the guy truly deserves a happiness and so does khushi. I'm glad that arnav is willing to move ahead with khushi beside him and try all the things he once did with akki,la and aman. No wonder he feels terrible visiting the places, doing things he once did either akki because I believe, akki was one among the people who truly cared & loved arnav when he was all alone without giving two hoots about his past. Right from the start, I have always loved the bond this two share with their friends and the way their friends understand them. With the conversation between NK and khushi,the bond they share was yet again evident. I have a feeling that something is about to hit the couple, thanks to you voicing it out through khushi but I hope their love for each other helps them face whatever is through towards them.

Lots of love,

Pinky

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#775

candy... how beautifully u write...!!!! i don't a have words to describe what i am feeling now..!!!!
marvelous update..!!!

they did cover another milestone.. they have pav bhajii treat..!!!

lovely night out.. watching movies.. flirting.. teasing... kissing...!!!

arnav thinks she didn't have to deal with his past hell life.. !!!

khushi is such a understanding.. caring.. wonderful lady..!!!

she can read arnav's each and every emotions..!!!

after getting news about rays.. she wants to share this with him in personnel...!!

arnav kissed her infront of his clients. so cute..!!!

i hate arnav's parents... how can they do this to a child..!!!!

arnav's past is really painful.. all alone in living in mansion.. having fever.. scared..lonely..!!! my heart cries for him..!!!!

didn't arnav have to go to London or somewhere to meet with kids..!!!! didn't arshi can go together..!!!

i just don't want their separation.. not even for one day..!!!

and i am damn sure after witnessing arnav's nightmare she will not go away from arnav..!!!
love u candy..!!!

waiting to read next..!!!!

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#776

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unres
My first comment on like never before😳 Sorry for late repy

first Chaverah millions of thanks for giving me pleasure to read dis marvelous story 🤗

cming to story😊
when i start reading 1st chapy i was damn confuse upto end, bt i decided already, I wl read 5 chapy n den judge story so just start reading 2nd chapy wer story take 360 turn, and upto 3rd chapy my tongue tie n i just msg u my honest cment regarding story.
It was unique start of story dear, n m in with the 1st part afterwords. I love d way u start the story.❤️

arshi surprise marriege and their relief to marry each other though they r strangers bt their was an invisible thread give them peace to be with each other and for each other. Love d way u potrayed their first nyt n mrng, awkwordness and understanding both r there.

They start they married life by opening themselves slowly to each other feeling warmth and secure in each other. Arnav finaly found sum1 to whom he cn spend his money n khushi found sum1 frm whom she can get surprise. He found sum1 who is waiting for him at home, who is cooking dnr, lunch, brkfast for him, sum1 cn able to gv him peacful sleep widout nytmaire and sum1 who is loving and caring for him to the no extent.

Khushi found her life for which she was craving, a happy, peaceful, loving, caring and understanding life with her man to whom she can say only her's widout any doubt.

Love the way glass jar crash scene u potrayed, it was emotional still care and undstnding was there.

Khushi's pride to be as MRS.ASR was amazing. Arnav understanding level was superbly potrayed regarding soman's case. Khushi share her burn skin incident, and her fear abt arnav's reaction was worth, bt the way arnav handle her is amazing. And at last arnav to start opening upto khushi abt his past. Chaverah love d way u use adjectives to potrayed arnav's life plant flowers and creeper, kudos to you.👏👏

ps. Cment cntn in next post😳

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#777

resh
unres
cment for nxt parts😳

arshi first kiss was amazing, the way u use scenario, was superb ⭐️ passion with care, sensation with emotions and last disturbance by Tyson😆 its was fabulous.

Khushi stay awake whole nyt for arnav giving excuse of her work load only to make him realise he is no longer alone in dis journey was indeed touching scene. While arnav to undstand her struggle to save Rays frm Zeal and use professional way to help his wife, superb😃

Anjali and Arnav's relation took place in hurdle situation bt it was strong and more dan any blood relation, awsm scene dear 👍🏼

their confession on valentine day was such an oustandingly written. U wrote 14 feb special update with chapter number 14 is it coincident? Or u plan it? Hats off, i love it❤️

they attend Mass together which one of life long experience to have ur with u and both enjoyed it though after it what hapnd was actualy horible bt dis make their first Mass more memorial

When i read in 2nd part payal is no more m lyk then with whom akash is going to pair, bt when u reveal akash death truth i felt lyk persn who r destined to be together wl be together nt on earth den in heaven, though i didnt lyk akash death truth, bt story behind it was amazing.

Love akhilesh tell khushi to call him papa."I'm entwined to him forever." Most touching statement it was.

Khushi is on her menstrual and arnav was know nothing about it, i love d way you potrayed whole scenario. Arnav's worry and trying his best to be in control with giving his atmost time to khushi and asking help frm lavanya was amazing. On the other hand khushi was experiencing her first time care in dis painful days.

Ammi, understand arnav's craving for love widout any word and give him his long tym wish to be having a mother. 😊 and with that he is going to be god father of cming ltl angel. One of most rare and cherishing moment of arnav's life.

Lawanya and Aman take initiative to bring back old arnav by enjoying their gala time like they did with aakash. They are indeed bestest buddies arnav is having. What he suffer in past in all that sumthing soothing he got with the form of lawanya, aman and aakash.

Khushi's buaji come widout notice and speak sh*t abt khushi's mother making khushi all broken bt her saviour, warmth her arnav was there to handle her and gv his piece of mind to the lady who is speaking bullshit.Honestly, you never took care of her. Its she who did that to
you As well as he didnt believe on buaji's words "I think there is a lot, lot more to your
mother than what has been
revealed. I believe there is. He decide to dig the truth is realy touching, love his sincerity towords khushboo.

finaly arnav share his bitter past with khushi and gain a different strength. Love the way khushi sennar's, giving them own piece of mind while handling arnav with pure love and warmth of care.

And finaly with his wife he able to move on leaving his betraying and fearful past behind.

Oh god Chaverah what have u done with me?😲 more than ArSh i m in fear that how they both can stay away from each other for a week😒

fabulous story dear, love it to the core, each and every character are amazingly potrayed. I mostly love unique starting of the story and end of every update with "Like Never Before" sentence giving extra charm to each update. Mindblowing work dear.😳

p.s. I have gv summarize cment on all 20parts. Sory if my cment is irritating or boring.
Want to knw two things. Which other(except hindi english) language you use? And wish to knw shashi's behaviour towards khushi when she was child.😊
thanks again dear.

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#778

phew...read the whole thread three ...finally...

am really really sorry couldnt keep up to date with your updates...have been dam busy..

but please dont stop sending in the updates...i love your stories to the core..and this is my favorite one...if not immediately i will reply...

its been a roller coaster ride reading this updates...

it was superb and amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏

its so painful knowing their pasts...they surely have come a long way and have succeed in their career...they understand their values and life in so much better way...

next update awaited😃

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#779

Wow it was really a beautiful and long update

Loved the way Arnav is coming out of his shell and started to try to live the life he was living with Akash

Aenav and Khushi's night out it tarrace was really so lovely

You described Arnav's worry about Khushi's being in mess with him and Khushi's reply to him about how much she is healed and happy after their marriage very beautifully

Khushi and NK' s bonding is also amazing

Loves the way Khushi went to Arnav's office to give him surprise

Arnav's past was really horrible for a little one

But Khushi is their to heal him and both are really made for each other

Both are trying to make other happy forgetting their scare and pain

Really loved the whole update too much

Is their something big going to happen in their life like you voiced out it out through Khushi's thought

Thanks for giving us such a long and beautiful update

And giving time and words for your readers cpmments

Waiting for next update eagerly

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#780

Wonderful 3 parts long update. Arnav is going through so much. Good that Khushi is by his side and he crossed one more hurdle by eating pav bhaji. Wonderful update and nicely written.

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