Virika FF: Forever and Ever - Thread 2... Ch. 14 - pg. 44

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Sameeha Anwar

@Sameeha.Tacker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

please let my Gia be okay!

finally u updated which feels like an eternity. I know u r busy baby but please dont do this to us. i already need a new update.

this update was brilliantly written and the way you wrote keeping up the emotions of a parents was mind blowing.

I really hope its not a fracture.

u have nailed it yet once again.

busy doing errands so sorry for this short comment but i got a notification of u posting the update that's why i m right here writing this comment

update sooonish

and i hope this soon is very soon

lots of love

Sameeha

P.S- nish u took my place 😭😭😭

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

UnRes❤️

😭 😭
the update made me emotional
pooor gia 😭 hope its not fracture
just loved the way u have expressed the emotions jeevs panicking seeing her daughter
beautiful written
rooo aagaya hope everything turn out well

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Ankita Mehta

@MehtaAnkita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

As lame as it sounds keeni. I was sobbing during the entire update.

Why did u do this? But there can't be a better vision than you for this story. So I trust u with it and I know Gia will be found fine.

At least its better than the cliff that was hanging from past 1 week. Now that Virenji and Jeevika are there with her, she will get better.

Especially loved Viren here, even in the state of panic he is so careful about his wife and has such understanding of the situation not allowing her to stay in xray department.

How can Jeevika doubt Gia's Dads care for her. Glad she agreed to go back to room.

oopppsss she blurted out about her pregnancy. It was so good to read Vanshika supporting her. She's the best MIL.

Can't see Jeevika crying. I just hope Gia gets better soon.

How much I hate you for this but not more than I love you :*

Thank you very very much and sorry for bugging you!

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Awe such a sad update!
Bt I stil luved ih!!!
As gud as ih was (n trust me ih was really gud!) ih was really emotional!
Hope gia gets better really soon!
U described virikas emotions sooo well!
Continue really soon!
Can't wait 4 the next update!
😊

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Simarpreetm

@Simarpreetm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Thank u Keeni for the update.. Finally we get one after an entire week. Such a long wait n when we get one we get another shock whr Gia has hurt herself.. The way u hv described jeevika's state is amazing. Her panic n worry for her daughter n not being with her when Gia needs her the most. Viren consoling his wife when he himself is worried n tensed for his daughter. Jeevika insisting on being close to her daughter n Viren being the calm one in this situation also n reminding jeevika tat she can't enter the X-ray room as she may be pregnant. How caring is he. Never forgets to keep his love safe n sound no matter what the situation.. N yeah his promise to her tat he wld stay by his daughter till the test are done. Jeevika can never doubt Viren for the love he has for Gia. Jeevika blurring it out tat she may be expecting to her family n the way vanshika stands by her n supports her.. Keeni u write so well n each n every emotion can be felt when we read it.. Thanks for the update.. But I hate u for stopping it whr u hv n I'm sure u won't let Gia be in tat state for long n she wld be fine soon. Thanks for putting in so much effort n giving us the update.. Love u girl. N hope we get the next one even quicker.. :p

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neemaneema

@neemaneema

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

😃 Finallyyy updated.

I knw dat u r busyyy bt was craving for it.

Such a sad update.

Myy Gia baby..landed in hospital.

I can imagine viren and jeevika' state.

Hope Gia go back to home sooon.

Love u for giving the update.

Do cont.sooon

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Oh nooo poor Gia!!! 😭
Jeevs emotions were on point
Nailed it again girl!
Can't write much cuz I'm busy but do update soon!!! :)

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liveistolove

@liveistolove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Gia got hurt.. !! 😔

Hope she will be fine..nothing serious happens with her..

jeevika is worried as a mother..she really wanted to stay with her daughter..but cannot stay..thank god viren is there to convince her and take care of Gia..

The news is out before the confirmation..😲

Jeevika blurted out unknowingly..

Hmmm..but the situation is such where no one is able to celebrate the sweet news..

Hope soon every sad thing gets erased and happiness fill their heart and soul..

Eagerly waiting to know what happens next..