Mahabharat Katha:T#4; Part 52 On Pg 140 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

very nice..
must appreciate ur hard work...
doing great job..
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Thank You Di !!
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks Di !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chaithali

Read last two updates together and boy loved it 👍🏼👍🏼



Thank You So Much !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

You know what, dear, I personally do not like this Syamantak track much. Our Darling Lord had to face such a tough situation 😭 of course it also shows us how capable He is to handle these situations singlehandedly 👍🏼

Yes, even I don't like it ! Everyone blamed him, when he was absolutely clueless about what was going on (human perspective).

You have narrated this story with an unique style which I loved! Yes, Lord wanted the gem for welfare of Dwaraka vaasis but so many people misunderstood Him 😭 even including Dau 🥺 also Akrur Ji played some role here, which does not match with his general character 😔 anyway, Devi Satyabhama is already here, so it's time of her father's murder, right? Also I loved Jamvubaan's devotion to his Lord Ram 😊

Haan...Akroorji's role was quite unexpected here ! 😭

Another thing, this Syamantak track is parallel with lakshagriha track. Just after marrying Devi Satyabhama, Krishna got a message that Pandavas died at Varanavat & rushed there with Satyaki. After Krishna left Dwaraka, Satrajit was murdered at night & Satyabhama went Varanavat to inform this to her Lord, driving the chariot by herself. Then Krishna had to return home immediately but He ordered Satyaki to collect ashes of Pandavas, which I guess as a signal to Satyaki that they did not die so should be found out.

Really, I have a slightly different story in hand, i.e, Dau goes with Kanha, and both of them hunt down Shatadhanva, after which Dau goes away to Mithila and Krishna returns to Dwarka to deal with Akroor and Kritavarma escapes.

Will wait to see how you handle this complex track 😊 btw which source are you following for this? Vishnu Puran or Harivansha?

None, I have in hand only those Udbodhan Karyalay Children's Books...😔

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jayshu17

👏👏👏 👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️




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Thank You So Much !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...



Thank You So Much Meghadi !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome update dear

loved it
Krishna married to Jamvati n Satyabhama..
beautiful!!
thanks for pm
do continu soon



Thank You So Much Di !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great yaar wow..waiting 4 d next.
Hey plz if u update anything related to krishna plz inform me.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

Heyy Pro..

finally, I am here.. i din't really get time to look into this.. plus, u update very frequently.. lol..
i would really appreciate if u could please give me a brief idea about this thread.. and what stuff u write about..
because i hv to read it from starting..



Aww, Swatidi ! Actually, You could visit the 1st page for the info. THe main thing is, I'm writing Mahabharat in my own words. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Indu_IF

Enjoyed reading was a good update.



Thanks Di !!

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