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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's………… Aliyah! (you're correct!)
Aliyah: You're Simone……… You're Simone!!!! How could you? You have no right!
Simone: I haven't come to take Josh.
Aliyah: What about Rohit!
Simone: What?!
Aliyah: Voh toh tumhare pyaar mein pagal tha. Par tum! After he heard about your death. He couldn't take it. We had to take him to the mental asylum. Ever since then, I've hated the name Simone. You know, Rohit was like my brother. He would always tell me about Simone. But then… I always felt bad when you "died" but knowing it was just a little play to you! Death effects other people more than yourself. Because you just go away without any pain, but the people who are left are the one who have to take it.
Simone: What! How did all of this happen! Take me to him. I want to meet him.
Aliyah: No! He is happy with his wife, Neha, and newborn child, Pooja. You know, Simone, why I really hate you? Because, you're the reason Rohit forgot about me, the one who he called sister. he didnt have anyone to all his own but me and you but u left him!!
Simone: Aliyah, please. I don't want to harm him or his family in any way! Please, let me meet him!
Aliyah: NO! Tumhe apne bachai ki kasam! Tumhe mere bhai ki kasam, tum Rohit sai dhoor rahogi!

Everyone is shocked! Aliyah slowly walks up to Josh.

Aliyah: Josh……… Meh hoon.. Aliyah……(Silence)
Kuch tho bolo… Please Josh, say something…(Silence again)

Angad: Ali.. (Aliyah interrupts)
Aliyah: No, no Angad. NO! Josh, please. You have to talk, to me!!! Please. I'll die if you don't! If you want to go back to Simone, then you cant but please… say something! (crying)

Josh slaps Aliyah across her face!
How dare you say something like this! Who are you to decide who I should go to or not! I told you before and I'm telling you now, I am yours and I will never leave you!
Josh and Aliyah are hugging and crying…
(like this.. just imagine… imagine josh and aliyah hugging like this... picture them in kk's place
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pleases may i have lotsss of comments.. plzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
yes you may have lots of comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments comment coments comments😉
plsconti soooooooon 👏 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Gr8 part... cnt wait for u to cont!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 verry nice update soon daer 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant continue this week.. sryy.. i have people coming over and gotta get ready for that.. sry guyzzz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Everyone is happy Josh is finally out of his shock and its nothing to tell the doctor about.

Everyone left the room to let Simi rest. Then we see a park and kids playing with their parents. We also see a bench and someone sitting on it. Its Prithvi!

Prithvi: How could mom! Is she mine or Simone's? She should be siding with me!

Then he sees a couple breaking up. It seems because she is a single-mother. You can hear her saying "I can't believe I trusted that you wouldn't mind me with a child!"
Prithvi: See, that's all a kid is good for!
But then he sees a kid with his parents and they are the happiest people alive! Prithvi feels something inside of his but ignores it.

A lost boy comes up to him.
Prithvi: Get lost kid
Boy: (2 yr old who can't talk)
Prithvi: Ughh… a little twerp who can't talk. Can it get any better!
The little boy goes back, starts to run but falls. Prithvi can't take it and runs up to him. "Are you okay? Oh yes you are! I know you are!(baby talk)"
He looks for his parents and finds them worried sick and thankful when he returns him to them!

Prithvi realizes how wrong he was to Simi and is about to go back when he receives a call. He quickly receives it and its Simone.

Simone: Prithvi, you aren't going to say anything. Only I am, okay. I can't believe I ever loved you but the truth is that I did, okay. I realize that you don't want this kid and since you don't want it I will abort it. Don't worry about your mom or sister, I will handle them.
Prithvi: but…
Simone: No, that's all I wanted to say Prithvi. Bye. And she goes.

Prithvi: NO! I have to stop her!
He races to the hospital in his car. "I must stop her from getting the abortion!"

Prithvi reaches the hospital and runs into Simone's room and it's all empty. Nobody knows where Simone is. She left Prithvi a letter.
"There's no more child Prithvi and I am going too. Alvida!
5 years later

Angad and Kripa have a 5 year old son, Prateek. Aliyah and Josh also have a 3 year old daughter, Preeti. We see Prithvi in a dark room sitting all alone.
Prithvi: Today would be my kid's birthday (if it was a normal delivery) but God must be making me pay for my sins as well as Tarun's.
We see a flashback of when Simi left. Damini tells Prithvi everything.

Prithvi handles business. He left Aliyah after Simi left because he realized how much he truly loved her. He hopes that one day he will meet her and they will make up for the kid he forced her to murder.

He has a meeting at the restaurant and Angad comes with him because they are partners. (Everyone forgave him over the 5 year time)
Prithvi: (yelling) Come on Angad. We'll get late!
Angad: (yelling) I'm coming. Just let me get this stupid tie on!
Kripa: Here let me help
Angad: Why? Then I'll have to leave early.(flirtingly)
Kripa: Badmash! Chup!
Angad: Kripa! You're no fun at all!
Kripa sticks her tongue out and pushes him out. When Angad reaches there he sees Prateek talking to Prithvi, whispering something in his ear.
Angad: What are we talking to chacho now?
Prateek: (innocently) Nothing. Right Prithvi chacho.
Prithvi: Yea Angad. What could we be talking about? Even if we were, if you came out early you would've known.
Angad: Okay, okay. Prateek where is your Josh chacho?
Prateek: With Preeti. Let him. She had been crying for him for days because you people always give him work! (Jokingly)
Angad: I'll see you later!(to Prateek) Come on lets go Prithvi.

They arrive at the restaurant and the meeting was successful. They are about to eat so Angad goes to the washroom to wash his hands. Prithvi is about to order food when he sees Simone. Right then, Angad comes out and tells Prithvi he got an important call and has to go somewhere. Prithvi says okay and goes to follow Simone. (he doesn't tell Angad about seeing Simone and she doesn't see him) He follows Simone to a park where he sees a kid run to her!

Angad goes full speed home to see Aliyah tensed and Josh trying to console her. (Preeti went to the neighbors to play) Angad runs to Aliyah.
Angad: What in the world…
Aliyah: Angad, I got a call from Neha. Rohit is better. He remembers everything. He wants to meet me. We have to go there!
Angad: Why didn't you guys go then?
Josh: You took the last car, man! Remember, mine is at the mechanics!
Angad: Come on. Let's go.
Aliyah: Yeah, we just have to wait for Kripa. I want her to go with me. I told her, she should be coming any minute now.
Angad: Okay, so that's another hour right there.
Josh is trying to signal him to stop. [tap, tap]
Angad: She's behind me isn't she.
Josh nodded..
Kripa: What were you saying?! I will see you later. Right now Aliyah needs me!


that was 2 pages time new roman on word!! olzl lots of comemnts. now i'm sure only 1-2 parts left..
Edited by brainychild92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part oh nice u have made prithvi realised i think simone didnt abort the kid
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part 👏 👏 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am a new reader and i think ur fanfic is fabulous just grt and i think angad is in shits for what he sed

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