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Posted: 18 years ago
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Prithvi is relieved seeing Simone but is shocked to see a girl run to her. He is thinking about that letter Simone gave him about how there is no more kid. He thinks whose 5 year old kid could it be if she killed his. Then he sees a man come toward Simone (doesn't see who) with a seven year old boy in his arms and hug her. He then sees the girl and boy playing like brother and sisters. Prithvi goes home before he breaks apart.

In the car he is crying non-stop.
Prithvi: How could Simone go to another man? She can't just leave me like that. But what I did to her wasn't good either. She just did what mom did. Luckily for her she got a man quickly and had his children instead of mine!

On the other hand we see at the park Simone and the guy who hugged her.
Simone: Where were you Prem (Manoj Bhora)? I waited at the resteraunt for at least an hour before I came. You said you would pick me up from my shift. Anyways, because you didn't come, I did overtime so hopefully it'll balance out with the rent.
Prem: Oh come on Simone. Why don't you ever let me help you. What's the use of being rich if I can't help my best friend in her time on need.
Simone: My bad days haven't come that I need help. I mean what's the point of having legs and arms if I'm not going to use them?!
Ahem, Ahem…
Simone turns back and sees Mukti!!(Tina Parekh)
Prem: You came, Mukti. How was the meeting?
Mukti: Prem! What are you doing? You didn't even pick Simone up from the restaurant! And why are you bugging her about the money. We asked multiple times and this girl doesn't listen so why bother. Anyways, when I ask, you always say no!
Prem: That is because I know I will never get it back
Mukti: WHAT!!
Prem: Wait, did I say that out loud. OH NO! I am so sorry Mukti. Its just I mean we are giving Simone the money as a loan not that I'd ever expect you to repay. I just want to spend some time with my daughter right now and that's why I never take you out shopping.
Mukti: Good Answer!
Simone: Now will you guys stop fighting! Mukti you have never accepted anyone's help! Not even Prem's until marriage right? Now I won't accept anyone's until i……. I mean unless I get married.
Prem: And why won't you? Of course you will!
Simone: Come on, now it's getting late.
She yells: Sid, help Aastha come here! Come on we have to go!
Sid: Yes Aunty!

Sid is Prem and Mukti's kid. He is seven. Simone ran away from the hospital and they found her and became friends. Yes, Aastha is Prithvi and Simone's 5 year old daughter but Prithvi thinks she is with Prem. Mukti is a business worker and is going out on a trip for a week and Simone and Aastha will be left with Prem and Sid.

Mukti has left already. Prem is going to work so he is going to drop Sid at Simone's since she has a day off today. Prithvi is passing by the house when Prem knocks on the door and Simone opens. Prithvi sees and waits. Prem gives Simi a hug and leaves Sid with her. He goes to office. Simone is about to close the door when she sees Prithvi but the next second she doesn't. She thinks I must be missing him, that's all.

The next day we see Rohit come to Khanna house with his family.

Flashback:
You see Neha open the door and lead them all in. Rohit is in his room resting.
Aliyah: Rohit…
Rohit: How's my best friend doing! You haven't come to see me for such a long time. What's wrong?
Aliyah: You didn't remember me Rohit. Every time I would visit you would look at me like I am some alien so I just stopped because I couldn't see my brother/ best friend like that
Rohit: Let bygones be bygones. Oh look, you're wearing a sari and mangalsutra. Whose, may I know.
Aliyah: Rohit! Here, meet my husband, Josh.
Rohit: Josh. Nice name. You better not annoy her or I'll come after you.
Josh laughs: I can't think of life without her so don't worry.
Rohit: Now let me guess, you're Kripa(pointing at Kripa)?
Kripa: Yes. I am glad you are better. Aliyah really missed you.
Rohit: Yes, I haven't seen her since my wedding. Wait no, she came to see Neha deliver my daughter, Pooja. (She is now six) I would introduce you to her but she is at school right now. Right Neha?
Neha: Oh my god. You're right Rohit. We have to go get her in a little while.
Aliyah: It's okay Neha. We should be going anyways but you guys have to come.
Neha: We will when we get time.
Aliyah: No. Tomorrow is Saturday and so Pooja will have a day off too. Come then. Please! I will really like it.
Neha: Rohit?
Rohit: Okay, we will. Now is my little sister happy?
Aliyah: Very!
End of Flashback

Aliyah: Arre Rohit, you came. Come, Preeti was helping me set the table.
Neha: Very bad manners!
Rohit: Preeti?
Aliyah: My daughter. Come, I'll introduce you. As for you Neha, she likes to help!
Pooja: Can I play with Preeti and Prateek.
Aliyah: Of course beta! You go and meet them. Go ahead!
They eat and Prithvi leaves. Angad gets a call and he has to leave too.

Its around 6 and Prithvi can't stop thinking about Simone and that 5 and seven year old girl. He drives to the park to clear his head. He goes and sits on a bench.
Prithvi: I am so sorry Simone. Only if I could face you, I'd apologize. I am such a jerk. I couldn't even reach in time!
Prem: Excuse me.
Prithvi: Yes.
Prem: Do you mind if we come sit with you on this bench. Actually my son is tired and has no where to sit. I don't want him on the ground.
Prithvi: Oh, I understand. Go ahead.
He moves over.
Prem: My name is Prem. He moves his hand forward.
Prithvi: Hi. My name is Prithvi.
Prem: I don't want to be all in-your-business but I heard you calling yourself a jerk or something. It looks as if your in love?
Prithvi hesitates but decides to talk to him.
Prithvi: Yeah, I have such a past that I can't change anything even if I want to.
Prem: You can talk to me about it if you want. Don't worry, I wont make you the bad guy.
Prithvi tells him everything except her name.
Prithvi: I really am changed, really!
Prem: I can tell that you've changed. He tells him his story. (everything except Mukti's accident. In my fanfic, she didn't die and everyone accepted there relationship. As for Bajaj's track, he came and everyone knew Komolika was lying and Debonita and Komolika got life-sentenced and died in there. Happily ever after! If you don't understand because you don't watch Kasauti then don't worry. Point is, Prem was evil but turned good after falling in love with Mukti. You don't need to know anything else for this fanfic.)

Sid: Papa, I want to go play with Aastha!(Sid wasn't paying attention)
Prem: Okay Prithvi, I have to go. Actually my son and my friends daughter are good friends and he wants to play with her as I promised to take him earlier.
Prithvi: Alright. But promise you will come to dinner next week when your wife comes back. (He told him while they were talking.)
Prem: I can't as my friend is coming and we are going someplace.
Prithvi: Then why don't you bring your friend over also.
Prem: Okay, I'll try.
They exchange addresses and numbers and head off there own way.
Prem to Aastha's and Prithvi home.
When Prithvi heads home, we see a car behind him…



this took 3 pages on word.. i hope u like it.. plzz comemntttttt on what u think is next.. and whose car is it....????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome part oh nice u have made prithvi realised i think simone didnt abort the kid



prithvi isnt THAT smart 😉

thannks for the comment
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: janu_2006

awesome part 👏 👏 👏
cont. soon



thanks soo muchh
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

thanks dear nice part 👏


thanks for likinggg.. keep commenting!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: za7n4b

i am a new reader and i think ur fanfic is fabulous just grt and i think angad is in shits for what he sed



thanks for likingg... as for wat angad said im not stretching it too much anymore.. cuz i wanna finish it and go back to my other fanfic.. i think its better and hope people will read it even after not continueing for such a logn timee.... do read that too..

thanks for the coment!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jus read da last 2 parts... n i really like prem n mukti's entry in ur ff!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part thansk for clearing muktis doubt as its been ages since i watched kasuti and didnt knew wht happened to mukti
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome part thansk for clearing muktis doubt as its been ages since i watched kasuti and didnt knew wht happened to mukti



i hope i didnt create any misunderstanding cuz thats not wat happend.. tahts what i wanted to happen and so i put them in the fanfic..

hope i cleared that up..

and thanks for commenting, u and nehagupta_9
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cum on.. 2 comments!
i was going to post an extra long part and end this fanfic but i guess i will just post a little part.. probably up by sunday

i wil change my mind if i get more coments.. but otherwise... little part for endingg
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Posted: 18 years ago
guyz.. last week i was bzy so couldnt update.. my uncles future inlaws came over on saturday and on sunday my mom's friend came andptop was screwd a bit so her husband helped fix it..

now this week, on saturday is have a cleanup thing and its my friends bday party and sunday i'll be too tiredd but i will try to update..

thanks for understanding.. also plz some more comments to boost my energy.. i have a feeling nobody likes it.. 😭

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