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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
gr8 part
prithvi is so urghhh 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The doctor comes out looking for family of Simone. Prithvi comes to him.

Prithvi: Doctor, are you here for Simone?
The doctor nods his head.
Prithvi: What happened doctor? Are Simone and the baby alright?
Damini and Mishti comes in: What happened to Simone and the baby?
Doctor: Yes, we saved Simone and the baby but we need to take some more tests to make sure everything is okay with her and the baby.

Angad comes: Doctor, how is Kripa and my baby? They, by god's will, are fine. We put her to sleep but you can still go and see her.
Angad: Thanks doctor.

Angad leaves but not before giving Prithvi an ugly look.

Nurse comes: Doctor Simone (whispers something in his ear)

Doctor: She what! But that is way too risky! I will go and talk to her.

Damini, Mishti, and Prithvi all go out the door to hear what is going on.

Doctor: Ms. Simone, what am I hearing from the nurse. It's way to risky.


next: conversation btw simone and doctor
3-4 parts left.. small parts....lol

guess wat simone wants
Edited by brainychild92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
o and just a message: i jjust realized i am an IF DAZZELER!!!!!!!! THAT IS WHY ON SAT/SUN I WILL POST LONG PART!!!!!!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
KOOL part... liked da way angad gave prithvi the evil look, i think simone wants to get an abortion or sumthin!!!! dats wat my guess it, amazin part... but there were no A-K scenes agen... pls hav sum A-K scenes in da nxt 1!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
hey. thanks for the comments. its just the sooner i do something with prithvi the sooner i can do stuff with ak and finish this fanfic... i am going to change a litle..

jaya Bhattacharya- damini
Jatin Siyal as Aditya
Tarun....

u will find out who they are in the next part.. also these are all from Kasam Se... they arent actually in it except damini but they are important!

do comment and i will post a long part on sat/sun
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
awsome part that prithvi hes more disgusting than the show 😡 no offence
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
Angad opens the door quietly, making sure he doesn't disturb anyone.
Angad[whispering]: Kripa…
Nurse: Oh, hello. You must be her husband.
Angad nods his head.
Nurse: She was in severe pain so I injected her about an hour ago. It should wear off in a while You can stay here but please don't disturb her. She will wake up in a bit but don't wake her up before.
Angad is almost in tears hearing Kripa was hurt.
Angad: Yes sister. I will make sure I don't disturb her.
The nurse leaves.

Angad walks over to Kripa's bed and holds her hand and starts crying.

Angad: Kripa (he kisses her hand and starts weeping)
Then he touches her stomach and thanks god that his kid is just fine.
Angad: Thank you god. You saved my child. It had to go through so much but its still here.
He was about to break down so he decided to leave. As he was leaving, he felt a light grip on his wrist. He wiped his tears with his loose hand and then he turned around and saw a weak Kripa trying to smile.

Angad: Kripa… your awake. I am sorry. I didn't want to disturb you.
Kripa: No, no. It's not like that. I woke up and saw you leaving so I…
Angad: I should go.
Kripa: Why? You're not sick of me, are you? (teasingly)
Angad puts his finger on her lips: Don't you ever say that, Kripa. You know how much I love you.
Kripa: Angad. I was just joking. I didn't think you would react like this. I will never joke like this again. Please forgive me. (she holds her ears.. now remember she is extremely weak so it hurts)
Angad makes her relax: I will forgive you but on one condition.
Kripa: What is that my sweet husband?
Angad: Lets go from here!
Kripa: That is what I want. To get off of this stinky bed and go home.
Angad: You're getting me wrong Kripa. I mean, Lets go somewhere else. Away from all these tension. I don't want my kid living with all this tension.
Kripa: I know Angad. But there is still some time. If we leave what will happen to mamiji, and papaji, Karthic, Mishti, Sur, and lets not forget about Josh and Aliyah! There in such a big predicament with Simi and Prithvi. Damini aunty has been like a mother to us, Angad. We need to help her get through this. I promise you I will not take too much but I can't leave my family alone.
Angad: but Kripa, I can't see you in this hospital bed anymore.
Kripa: Angad, when I married you I promised myself that no matter what hard times come, I will not leave my family alone. After marriage, your family became my family, even more than my own parents. And as for hating to see me in the hospital bed, you will have to do that when I deliver so just get use to it!
Angad: Kripaaaa…..[whining tone]
Kripa: I love you Angad. I always will but I am not going to run away from my problems, okay. And my family problems are my problems! Understand my nave husband.
Angad: Yes my sweet wife. Now get well soon! I am going to get the doctor and make sure you are alright. Your not hurting are you.
Kripa: How can I when you are at my side?
Angad: Okay, then wait for a little while, I will go see your reports.
Kripa: Okay, be back soon!!




hope this was long enough... one page typed on microsoft word..
i wll post one tomrow or sunday!
if you want some more romantic stuff, then please pm me cuz i dont know romantic stuff

next: he conversation btw simone and doctor plus misthi-prithvi-damini drama thats vital to the ending! but its not the end..

Edited by brainychild92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

thanks for the comments all!!

armaghan0.. i no how u feel.. i hate prithvi.. but i wanted him to be evil.. before i started continueing she made him good but i dont think prithvi is good with the good guy image.. lolz..

nehagupta9: this part was especialy for u since u requested more ak part... hope u enjoyed it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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excellent part... thanx for makin it an A-K part!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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DOCTOR AND SIMONE'S CONVERSATION

Simone: Yes doctor. I don't want you to take the test. I can't have this baby.
Doctor: But Ms. Simone, You are just risking your life in the process.
Simone: I don't care about myself. If I can't consume again, I can always adopt and if I die then just think of it as destiny.
Doctor: No, that is wrong. Why don't you just wait to deliver it and then you can give it up for adoption.
Simone: No! I can't do that. I might get too attached.
Doctor: That's a good thing isn't it?
Simone: Doctor, I am not married. I… made a mistake. I…fell in love with…such a guy… (she was on the verge of tears and then started crying)
Doctor: Okay… We will go on with this operation.

Wait!!!!! Damini screamed
Just then Damini and Mishti come in.

Damini: Prithvi, just because of one mistake of yours she is going to abort her child! You must marry her and give this child your name!
Prithvi: What! No mom! I love Aliyah and she will be mine. I've changed mom! Before I couldn't say no to you and so I agreed to be with Kripa but now I know how to stand up to you. I will not agree to marry Simone! She is making the right decision by aborting the child!
~~~~~~~SLAP!!~~~~~~~~
Everyone is shocked! Because of what Prithvi said and because of Damini's slap!

Damini: I can't believe you Prithvi! You are disgusting. Get out of here!

Prithvi is shocked as ever but still leaves.

Mishti: Mom…
Damini: Mishti, what did I do wrong. I loved him so much, made sure he wouldn't go in same direction as……… but he still………
Mishti: Mom, please. Why didn't you ever tell him?
Damini: I never wanted him to feel like he isn't part of the family.

Simone: What are you guys saying?
Mishti: Simone…umm…
Damini: No, Mishti. Don't lie. We can trust her. I will tell her the truth.
Mishti: But………
Damini: No Mishti. We can trust her. The truth is, Simone,

Flashback
I use to love Prithvi's father but the problem was that he was a Casanova at my college but I was in love with him. We started dating and I thought I had changed him. One day I started puking. Turns out, I was pregnant. I was so happy but how was I suppose to know everything would've turned out differently. I told Tarun I was pregnant and he told me to abort it. He wasn't ready to have a baby. Forget a baby, he wasn't even serious about our relationship. I was broken. I was just about to commit suicide that my best friend Aditya stopped me. He decided to marry me. I gradually fell in love with him but it was too late. Prithvi was 3 when I found out that he had loved me all along so I told him how I felt too. We were so happy but then one day Adi got into an accident. He was in coma for 6 months. At that time I was having Mishti. When he regained conscious, I told him. He was so happy but he told me the worst thing alive. He told me that Tarun tried to kill him. I was furious but I couldn't do anything. Why? Because he died in the process. And now the person I love the most, Aditya, was dying, I couldn't stop him. He made me promise that I would love his upcoming child, and also Prithvi. He made me promise that I would love Prithvi like he was his child because he is. He said Prithvi isn't Tarun's, he's his!
~~~~Flashback~~~~

Damini: I was broken. I started to hate Prithvi because whenever I saw him, I would see Tarun. Bu then I remembered what Aditya said. I realized that it wasn't Prithvi's fault so why was I blaming him. I vowed from that day on, I would love Prithvi and never let Tarun's shadow on him. I would raise him to be a good boy and not like Tarun. When Prithvi told me he LOVED Kripa, I was the happiest person alive. That my son believed in love. So he wouldn't betray Kripa, I wanted them to get married as soon as possible. Just one time, he could've told me he doesn't love Kripa, I would've never forced him to marry her.
Damini breaks down crying.
Mishti: Mom, please. It's okay. That Tarun is gone!
Simone: Aunty, I am so sorry. I had no idea.
Damini: No, Simone, please, it's not your fault. It's my destiny.
Simone: No aunty, it's our destiny. Except you had a good enough friend who accepted you. But I don't even have that. That's what happens when you sacrifice your love for someone else.
Mishti: What are you talking about?
Simone: Umm… Nothing… Forget I even said anything

NO! I'D LOVE TO KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT!

Who said that? Stay tuned to find out. Oh, just a hint. It wasn't Mishti or Damini.



this was a pretty long part.. i no there is no ak but plz guess who said that.. i promise to include ak to the next part..

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