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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: armaghan0
that was reeally serious i guess amazing fic just read it

thanks and i hope u keep reading it. i am ending it in a few parts anywayz

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: janu_2006
just read yr ff n its gr8 n hope she doesnt get a miscarriage
cont. soon

thankx.. i hope u enjoyed reading it.. and as for the baby... cant promise anything 😉 😉

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

like i promised... ur next part

Everyone is in the waiting room. The doctor comes out.

Doctor: How careless can you guys get! You came earlier with Kripa promising to take care of her and now you're here with her again AND somebody else!

Angad: Please doctor, I am very sorry but I really need to know how they are. How is Kripa, and the baby? What about Aliyah, is she alright?

Doctor: Kripa is conscious now, but we need to take some test, to make sure the kid is alright, and Aliyah is still unconscious. She is taking a name again and again. She keeps saying, "Josh, save me. Please don't leave me. Go away, Pritz."

After hearing this, everyone is shocked but Prithvi, he is outraged. He grabs the doctor by the collar.

He says: No, you're lying. You are teamed up with everyone to take my Aliyah away from me!

Simi tries to stop Prithvi. She is crying.
Simi: No Prithvi, you can't do this. You'll hurt him!

Prithvi is so angered that he doesn't even realize it but he pushes her and she hits her stomach first and then her head. She has blood coming out because of the fall and she falls unconscious.

SIMII!!!!…………………… Mishti yelled!

Mishti: BHAI! ARE YOU CRAZY! YOU'RE JUST CREATING PROBLEMS! ALIYAH WAS SO HAPPY WHEN SHE WAS GETTING MARRIED TO JOSH BUT NOW SHE IS IN THE HOSPITAL! KRIPA'S PREGNANCY WAS COMPLETELY NORMAL BUT NOW SHE'S BEEN TO THE HOSPITAL ATLEAST TWICE! YOU PROMISED THIS INNOCENT WOMEN A LIFE AND NOW SHE IS GOING TO HAVE TO GO TO THE OPERATION THEATRE! WHY ARE YOU PLAYING WITH EVERYBODY'S LIFE! WHAT DID WE DO TO YOU? WE WERE SO HAPPY W/O YOU BUT NOW… BHAI LET ME TELL YOU ONE THING, IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO ANY OF THESE THREE WOMEN, I WILL NEVER FORGIVE… EVER!!!!! (then she walks away)

You see everybody's shocked face. (while she's giving this speech, people come and take simi away)

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Neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

Awesome part... i hope all 3 of them r alrite

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armaghan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

awsome part for once i loved mishty and pls let everyone be ok whys aliya scared of prithvi magnificent part but u con after so long

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

Prithvi is so shocked that the sister who loved him so much, who would never say anything to him, just screamed at him, humiliated him. He can't take it anymore.

THREE HOURS LATER

Doctor: Mr. Khanna, Your wife is just fine. We took all the test and if she gets another shock like this, it will affect her baby and she will get complications in her pregnancy that might compel her to abort the baby.

Angad: What!

Doctor: Yes, also, Mr. Josh, Aliyah is fine. She just had too much pressure on her and that caused her to faint. You can go and meet her in a half an hour. She is getting a final check-up, just to make sure she can go home.

Josh: Really. Oh thank god. Now everything will be fine!

Doctor: Ms. Damini, I heard Mishti ranting about how important Simi is to her? Are you by any chance Simi's mother-in-law?

Damini/Prithvi: What!
D: Why are you asking for her mother-in-law?

Doctor: Well, she is pregnant.

Nurse: HURRY DOCTOR HAKEEM, IN ROOM 235, IS LOSING OXYGEN
Doctor: Lets go!

Damini is shell shocked and so is Prithvi.

Damini turns and slaps Prithvi. (you know how in KZK Prena slaps or use to slap people [prem and anurag the most] think of it like that)

Prithvi comes out of his shock over Simi and is shocked that his mother raised her hand on him for the first time!

now i am trying to write a lonnngg part for the next.. and im sure its over in like 3-4 partz.. hope u enjoy and plz do comment!!

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

its not as long as i wanted but i am gonna finish this ff now.. in like 2-3 partz.. DO READ 😛

Prithvi: Mama…….

Damini: I'm not your mother! How dare you use a women to get you so called love and get her pregnant in the process! You disgust me, Prithvi!
Then Damini walks away. Slowly everyone else does too.

Prithvi sits down on a chair and remembers everything, How Simi found him in the river, took him to USA to get him better, and how when he gained conscious he had lost his memory and Simi was the only one who took him in and helped him. They show a flashback where when he finds out about Josh and Aliyah, he regains his memory and promises himself to break them up. There he comes up with a plan to lure Simi in his love web. He remembers all the dates he took her to, the slow dances they did, even the fun moments (like from KYPH with Angad and Kripa, just try picturing Prithvi and Simi. I know its hard but still.. lolz)

Flashback:

Prithvi and Simi are coming home, drunk. They aren't too drunk that they can't control themselves.

Prithvi: Come on, Simi. Lets watch a little TV.

Simi: No, its okay Prithvi. I am a bit tired and from the looks of it so are you.

Prithvi: Yeah, I guess you are right.

As Prithvi and Simi walk to their separate rooms, they look back at each other. Just then, Simi stops Prithvi.

Simi: Wait Prithvi.

Prithvi: What happened Simi.

Simi: I cant hold it in anymore Prithvi. I have to tell it to you.

Prithvi: I'm sure it can wait till tomorrow but if it can't then please don't hesitate to tell me now. You know I will do anything for you, even in the middle of the night.
Simi: I know Prithvi. That is why I have to tell you right now. I think…. I love you Prithvi. I think I've fallen in love with you.

Prithvi: What! Really! I can't believe it Simi because so have I.

They both run to each other. Simi is thinking: Finally, he is mine. And Prithvi is thinking: Yes, finally she is mine. Now I will defiantly stop Josh and Aliyah.

There hug gets so passionate that they kiss and it gets blurry.(I don't like thinking about it too much as I am sure you don't either!)

Flashback End.

Prithvi: Oh my god. She is pregnant. I can't become a father now, not with Simone! What should I do?