Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II) - Page 99

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Posted: 10 years ago

@canapoem: You know once I am done with this story I am going to write a spin-off where Khushi marries Arnav and slowly mercury poisons all of the Raizadas for revenge 😆
I will be doing one more Notes from the Past, but that will be just before the penultimate chapter. From now on the present chapters will themselves consist of any reference to the past.


Radhika, according to your note above, there is one more "Notes from the past" to be given out and that too before the penultimate chapter. Now this makes me wonder what is the big suspense which you have hidden from us, which you are planning to disclose it only in the end???? 😕
What googly are you going to throw at us in the end???? 😉

The notes from the past which you updated recently was no less than a big suspense and knowing you a little by now, I am really very curious to know about that big final piece of the puzzle well hidden from us readers.🤔



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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God! what a twist !! I never realized this angle..
Poor Kushi..the misunderstanding of Poonam Raizada cost her very much..Did Arnav come to know that Kushi had come to his non-existent party?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asmanichatri

First of, you are a little evil. I mean you give us this chapter right before the anticipation of Holi! 😆

But oh boy, this update was brutal. Though honestly this is what you had set us up for through all the notes from the past, it still was not an easy read.

I am not saying that Arnav should be given any leeway just because he is a hot mess and we the readers at least know that deep down he is a good person.. or at any rate grown up to be a good person, but I do understand his character nonetheless. Yes, he made mistakes and unwittingly (it would seem) pushed Khushi into a gigantic mess. But I think Anjali gave us an insight into his character, he is basically a less drama-queen version of NK. He wants to just be happy and do so with no confrontation. Not to mention he seems to suffer from some perverse abandonment issues. And while Khushi is right in the middle of every character's life, and drives the motivations of everyone, I am beginning to see this is more a coming-of-age story of Arnav Singh Raizada, not the boy he was, but hopefully the man he grew up to be. I still find him a compelling character.

And I think now I finally also understand Preeto's fierceness when it comes to Khushi. I don't know if you did this deliberately, but you set up Akash and Aman as wonderful, young men. But as the layers peel away, they seem increasingly like straw-men. Though my perceptions wildly oscillate as I read each update, so I am sure they will redeem themselves soon enough. You are a fine writer like that! But, but I can't wait to read what Holi brings. I hope that it is the beginning of Khushi's dignity being rightfully restored. I have faith in Arnav now and I daresay I also have faith in Payal. I think I am beginning to see your method.. you get us all worked up about a character and they will do the right thing eventually 😛


summarized wat i would have never been able to put in words 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my!!
Even Preeto contributed to Khushi's dilemma. However she has rectified that mishap many times over by sticking by Khushi and always being there very subtly and cleverly in many ways without making Khushi feel obligated.
Arnav I guess is slowly getting there in his own way...as are some others.

Loved the Chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was on a Tewari marathon today.
Hadn't read the ladt three chapters, so went back and read the ladt five to understand whats happening.
The farmhouse incident is a surprise
This gave an added reason to Poonam to hate Khushi.
Is the elder Raizada really a womaniser or does Poonam mistrust him without reason?

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!
So now we know.
Wonder what Arnav did? I read before that he lashed out at Kushi but really, he's the one who "lied", eh? If not for his "lie" then this would not have happened. And Poonam Raizada. seriously! Insecure of a schoolgirl?????? Idiot!! Or very, very cunning. Was she after Kushi's blood because of Arnav's dengue fever? She did say she had to take care of this girl (Kushi.) What a perfect opportunity!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arrey so sorry for preeto! I mean she must be so guilty. I want khushi to select aman over arnav..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CheshireBilli


Oh ye of little faith! There Khushi and Arnav are having the cutest awkward rabba ve's over old school photographs and uncomfortable sofas and here we don't believe they'll end up together? 😆

I think they will because firstly, Arnav and Khushi have both grown up lots, and secondly, YB said the whole point of this story was to more realistically explore the class differences between Arnav and Khushi. That implies a relationship, does it not? (back me up here, Radhika!)

And just in case they don't, I'm sure they'll explore plenty more awkward rabba-ve-ish ground before the end and that sounds like a lot of fun too.

P.S. Wrt to Poonam, honestly, there are a bunch of reasons why she would put up with the (occasionally) philandering husband. Everything from she being genuinely and a little blindly in love with Anand, to worrying about AR's share prices falling in case of a messy divorce could be a reason. 😆
And as canapoem rightly pointed out, IF Anand is the philandering sort, all of these incidents would look super suspicious to Poonam. Not that it justifies her reaction to Khushi in any way, but there you have it.

I am, more than ever, rooting for normally-snarky-but-foot-in-mouth-around-Khushi Arnav and cool-in-control-but-secretly-crushing-on-Arnav Khushi.

Agree. Arnav and Khushi will end up together. I am pretty certain it will end with Arnav reading The Goblet of Fire to Khushi on the terrace of 23 Chandni Chowk. Oops! Spoiler Alert.

But seriously, I feel even if they don't have some kind of perfectly resolved fairytale ending, it will be a happy one. You mentioned the K3G parallels the other day. Now I am seeing more of it. You know how in KJo's version Sr Raizada would be happy just doing the shava shava with PYTs, but in a more realistic version of it he will actually cheat on his wife.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asmanichatri

Agree. Arnav and Khushi will end up together. I am pretty certain it will end with Arnav reading The Goblet of Fire to Khushi on the terrace of 23 Chandni Chowk. Oops! Spoiler Alert.

But seriously, I feel even if they don't have some kind of perfectly resolved fairytale ending, it will be a happy one. You mentioned the K3G parallels the other day. Now I am seeing more of it. You know how in KJo's version Sr Raizada would be happy just doing the shava shava with PYTs, but in a more realistic version of it he will actually cheat on his wife.


@bold - This puts an entirely new spin on Nandini Raichand's words of "Mera pati sirf pati parmeshwar nain" ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poonam poonam poonam what's wrong with her? How could she ruin khushi's life without knowing whole story?
Honestly i don't think khushi and arnav should end up together. Arnav and raizadas deserve payal,she will suit them more than khushi. Khushi deserves better in her life.
Poor girl has gone through a lot in her life...
Yellowboots your writing style and story is so realistic <3 i am in love with it...

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