Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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RenuHooda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

..Very Very Good Update Love It

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

Lmao out of everything that was given to us the only thing I choose to take is the deep fry of the phone! Lmao! Finally some humor!

Let's just bask in the whole scene for a while as there's too much worry and negative feelings when it comes to Khushi and her life! Why is she always surrounded with miseries? Will she not see the light at the end of the tunnel at all?

I want her to live and enjoy life! Too much burden I say!

Anjali Arnav conversation was light yet deep!

I'd like to totally avoid Mrs Raizadha!

The kitchen scene and there on was like walking on a thread you never know when you get to the other side and fall into awkwardness!

Preeto Khushi convo was fun too! And Aman why again is he here now?

When will her love aspect open up?

Cheers

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#393

Great update, but looking forward to the present. I feel like the story is moving sooo s..lll..ooo..w!!! I guess I'm waiting for the fireworks between Arnav and Kushi! Aman is baaaccck... and just as mannerless! I wonder why he is seeking Kushi? Is he here to ask for forgiveness? And perhaps to fall in love again? Seems like Poonam knew she had done wrong by Kushi. Has she apologized to Kushi, yet? Seems like everyone has something to be forgiven where Kushi is concerned!!!

Waiting for next update.

And oh yeah, last para was awesome and funny!

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#394

"On the one hand, he would get to talk to Khushi alone. On the other hand, he would have to talk to Khushi alone" Now this sums up Arnav's state of mind perfectly!

Their antics to get the cylinder going was so funny. Arnav's presence seems to make even the most mundane routine task a Mr Bean like adventure. The image of Arnav then stretching out drinking that dire chai was so amusing.

I love the way you write of the thoughts twirling in both their minds. And the way they then blurt out the most bizarre statements. Which would make perfect sense to the listener if he was sitting in their heads 😆

It was interesting reading of Poonam Raizada being insecure. It actually makes a lot of sense, explaining her pathological need to control everyone and everything around her. And HP is there to extricate her from marital arguments as well?! Ugh, the man is just creepy, slithering around everywhere.

Kya entrance maara Aman ne! New-on se hai, toh kuch gadbad to hona hi tha. 😆

And Radhika, we're all waiting to know the answer to the question "crush or fascination"

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Is this a line, triangle or rectangle?? A for Arnav
A for Akash
A for Aman

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

I am fascinated by the relationship between Arnav and Khushi. What is left unsaid and I acknowledged is as important as what is said and the sheer awkwardness that surrounds them speaks volumes.

You very cleverly left us hanging in the last chapter with Khushi's head and heart talking and I guess since ArnV stayed for chai...the heart won?

Loved the gas cylinder debacle...lol...poor Khushi

Also loved the phone frying...lol

I am so looking forward to what Light Aman can shine on the past, present and future of this relationship.

Poonam Raizada has secret insecurities? Tell me more...

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Radhika, how do you do it everytime??? How do you keep us glued to your update and story everytime??? 👏

This update too was as awesome as the previous ones.

Arnav entering the kitchen, calling Renu bhabhi as bhabhi, and then helping them open and fix the new cylinder - all this looked so domestic. It felt that Arnav was one among them even though Khushi was fuming with anger for his interference.

This left me kind of wondering, what if Poonam had seen it??? 😲

Khushi once entered their house and Arnav's dad got sick and she tried to help him out of panic and Poonam destroyed her life for that. And Arnav also spoke so badly with her for entering their private spaces. Now what did he do today??? How ironic!!!!

Another funny thought I had after seeing Arnav call Renu as Bhabhi, all Akash and Renu pairing fans, what if Akash also called her as bhabhi, then their pairing can be flushed down the drain. 😆

Somehow the story of the cupboard which had Khushi's sports trophies was a reminder not only for Arnav for me too how the Raizadas destroyed an innocent girl's life for no fault of hers.

Whenever Arnav and Khushi meet, there is always a certain kind of awkwardness, a certain hesitation, a certain familiarity yet unfamiliar, I love the way both struggle to have a normal conversation and how you write it. Its like they want to talk to each other, know more about each other yet they dont want to talk and be around each other and not to forget they remember even small details about each other which is kind of freaking too sometimes. 😆

Iss confusion ko kya naam doon????

Coming now to Poonam, so she knows about the trust fund set up by her husband and son for Anjali's future and she got hurt. So Poonam how does it feel to get hurt and feel betrayed by your own people??? Why is she so insecure in her life??? Arnav feels its her insecurity which drove her to do all those acts against Khushi, but why the insecurity???

And now who is this Mihir Gupta??? I really hope he has no connection to Khushi in anyway.

So Anjalli has sowed the seed of doubt in Arnav's mind regarding his feelings for Khushi. Would Arnav probe more into this thought, would he look deep inside his heart and try to asses what he felt for Khushi all these years???

Preeto is so cute. But she in one loyal friend whom everyone would like to have.

And kya entry maara Aman ne!!!!

Aman ne maari entry aur

Khushi ki phone ka bhaji ghanti tel mein!!!!

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: sman
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Yummm update..yummier than Mr.Grey..he has only 50 shades but your Arnav has sooo many..read it as soon as you updated will b back with long comment sooonnn

The Jamie Dornan or Dormon whatever guy playing Christian is so non grey. But he is sweet.

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#399

YB Tewari and sons (I cant even think of an acronym for the title, TASTTCC or TAS23CC sounds like someone's number plate) is one of those very few pieces of work , where I not once zone off in the middle. Trust me the last time I read something so intently, trying not to miss out any line or word was before my geography board exam ages ago. You write like a pro, and its very difficult to find something so well written that you can imagine yourself standing there , already pre witnessing oil splashing out as the phone dropped into it.