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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mini_


In this story, I feel Khushi and Arnav are just not meant to be together. For me too much water has flowed under the bridge. I am scared of Poonam and Payal's father's gang of goons.
They can to the unthinkable and unspeakable. I dont envy Khushi at all. Arnav has a crush on her its obvious but he has been a coward about it till now. And, I dont want to reward him.
He is not the prince in shining armor for Khushi anymore.
On the other hand Aman, has held my hopes now but I will wait for things to take shape.

There is only one way Arnav can redeem himself... Help Khushi, Protect her and woo her like a lovelorn who can not breathe the next breath without her. And, I think even khushi will have a hard time believing Arnav if it is anything other than this.
SHe has Known Arnav for so long that just his confession would mean nothing to her now. She is too tired fighting alone and I am sure she is yearning for some care, a loving support, some one who can soother per pain and worry lines away.
And, here comes the Poonam Element. She is protective of her son and daughter but has no concerne for another's child. What she did to Khushi is heartless. I dont like her. Her own family is scared of her. I have a feeling Arnav and Anjali try to avoid Poonam as much as they can.
She is the terror of Khushi's life and the boulder that fell on her. Arnav has to crush that boulder to a powder if he expects any kind of relationship with Khushi. If she lets him go on a lighter redemption path it will not work for me.

I want to see some high volt, super intensity and heavy load passion coming from Arnav... if Arshi have to come together in this story... anything less does not work for me.

waiting for Radhika to show us the true path this love Story needs to take.


Loved your thought process. One thing we cannot forget is that Khushi did like Arnav once. Even when she talks to Preeto, she always tried to protect Arnav. Even though his mother has wronged her, still she does not hold him responsible. Infact she does not even hate him or Anjali. Though she finds it hard to talk to him, awkward most times, yet if you look at all the notes from the past, she has always shared nice camaraderie with him and he when they are alone has shown his care and affection for her.

As you said if he wants to pursue a romantic interest with Khushi, then Arnav has to do an extra ordinary job in wooing her. First and foremost he has to build that confidence to face his mother and he might have to go to any lengths to protect her from Samir singh's gang and Poonam's schemes.

I really hope Khushi does not give in that easily to Arnav's charms.

Aman, lets see why he has appeared after all these years.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


Loved your thought process. One thing we cannot forget is that Khushi did like Arnav once. Even when she talks to Preeto, she always tried to protect Arnav. Even though his mother has wronged her, still she does not hold him responsible. Infact she does not even hate him or Anjali. Though she finds it hard to talk to him, awkward most times, yet if you look at all the notes from the past, she has always shared nice camaraderie with him and he when they are alone has shown his care and affection for her.

As you said if he wants to pursue a romantic interest with Khushi, then Arnav has to do an extra ordinary job in wooing her. First and foremost he has to build that confidence to face his mother and he might have to go to any lengths to protect her from Samir singh's gang and Poonam's schemes.

I really hope Khushi does not give in that easily to Arnav's charms.

Aman, lets see why he has appeared after all these years.


Yes, I think even Arnav knows that both of them have a thing for each other. but both are on a denial mode. But Arnav has not respected her as a classmate, or as a person, in public, really till now. He has never believed her. Everytime he has taken the opposite stand when it has come to Khushi... We know Khushi's pov more than Arnav's thats obvious. So we know that she does have butterfly flutters for Arnav. 😳

And, Khushi is a strong girl. I don't think just coz she has a crush on someone she will go all soft on him. She is polite, she is friendly but she definitely knows that he has never really been a friend. He does not acknowledge her in front of his friends.

And lastly, he left her alone and prone to any kind of vulnerable situation in the station that he last saw her.

Khushi can not forget all of that. He never did anything to strengthen her feelings towards him. Crush is an attraction we can have for anyone. Love takes its trial and tribulations.

Arnav needs to show that his spine is fine/ working and his heart is at the right place. But, if I were in Khushi position, I would still not trust him.

She knows him since she was of 13yrs old and now she is 27yrs old. Even if she likes him, she knows his limitations. And she knows who his mom his!!!😲

I have a feeling Aman has made an appearance to put things in the correct perspective for all of them.

We will see...

Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love how you bring so many issues to light while narrating the story. The feelings that normally parents have when their children marry below their social status, were so aptly described through Poonam Raizada. Also the scene of Khushi's prizes was really poignant and we have all been through such phases in life where the expectations have not been fulfilled and there are glaring reminders around and one just cannot get through with the disappointments. There are many such examples within your story where I get the feeling that I have seen this situation in my life and its such a pleasure to read your work.

Oh , by the way, I loved Aman's entry at the end of the chappy and don't take so long to update now :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tewari and sons Special -deep Fry phone
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan

I wanted Barun Sobti. Period. But THAT crossed all limits of wishful thinking. So As you said I settled for Gosling , Matt Bomer , even Cumberbatch( Heck even HE got married). But I still would not have gotten myself to watch 50 shades. Those books were shit.



Ofcourse Barun is best suited for the role..I imagined him while watching the "what crap" movie ;-)
Jamie is yummm too..he once again proves that "models can not act".. but I love John Abraham too..;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am again tired and sleepy. So a short sa, mamuli sa comment again

NAHIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU???!!!!! 😔

He was a little surprised that his cousin allowed Khushi to be with him and actually decided to escort Payal home.

Payal liked Aakash. Okay, liked was stretching it, but she didn't have the same level of disdain that she reserved for others.

Once she hung up, she wondered if there was more to the fact that Payal was missing the New Year lunch. This was the first time that they had invited someone who was not family and she had decided not to come.

But Aakash and Payal, that is an interesting equation.

Besides, Payal does not dislike Aakash.

By Payal's standards that is tantamount to her being in love with him.

😭 😭 😭 Please prove me wrong. Pleaaassseee 💔 💔 💔

It was only this that mended my broken heart: he was still going to keep their interactions to the minimum. It would be good all around. Except that, somehow he did not like this thought. Was Anjali Di right after all? Did he have feelings for her? Surely not. Did he? Maybe.

But that doesnt mean I ship ArHi. This is the only story in which I dont ship either ArHi or PayAsh... 😕

Khushi has so gotten used to being in-charge and making decisions that Arnav taking initiative in helping her (which is anyways so disconcertedly out-of-character from the Arnav of yore) or Renu bhabhi asking Arnav in or thanking him doesnt sit well with Khushi. However, once a long time back Khushi had delivered the wonderful news that Arnav and she make a good team. Would they still? Would Khushi ever relinquish control over her life? Would she make Arnav a part of her life in Chandni Chowk? I am asking these questions coz the issue of TnS is going to explode really soon.

Awkward... That is the only word that comes to me on reading ArHi's 'new years date'. Btw, if Arnav feels so guiilty on seeing the reminder of what Khushi lost coz of his family (I am referring to her cupboard full of her trophies and certificates) what would Poonam feel when she will come to realise all what Khushi lost coz of her. It was a relief to read that she feels some remorse for what she did in the past. Now Poonam isnt fond of Payal. Payal is associated with people who want to tear down TnS and TnS is owned by Khushi. When shall the twain (Poonam and Khushi, I mean) meet?

IF Aakash does have a soft-corner for Payal in his heart would that result in a clash between them for his support for Khushi when the TnS issue comes to the forefront?

Whenever Anjali meets Arnav and they talk of Khushi, she keeps asking him to stay away from her. Is there more to this for the future?

You answered the question why Arnav is suddenly so bothered by Khushi so beautifully... And it makes perfect sense 👍🏼

I didnt undst what Arnav meant when he said this to Khushi: "You really do get around?" 😕

I like Preeto's and Anjali's sense of humor a lot and love the way they trouble Khushi and Arnav respectively 😆

Also I would like to think the best of Khushi's parents. I am sure they didnt mean ill with their dismantling or moving the cupboard business.

Aman is back! And he seems good so far... Can I please ship Aman and Khushi if possible? 😳
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i dont knw y but i can never come with with the comments after i read an update for this story ..sorry 😔... im so busy processing the update... i realy dont knw wat i feel...all i knw is i desperately want to read further...
yayyy aman is back!! 😊... arnav khushi convo was awkward... waiting fr sr. raizada to talk to arnav

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww👏👏👏👏👏 I have no words to describe how much I loved the story😊 One of the best stories in IF and also one of my favorites now😃 ur an amazing writer👏👏👏 ur updates are mostly practical and that is what i loved the most in ur writings😛 though there are not much arshi scenes, the way u write the updates make the readers stick to the ff and wanting to read even more, and that is how i personally feel and I am very thirsty for the next updates😊 I would love to say more about how i feel about the story but it will become one more long story for u to read😆😆😆 So I am not going to waste ur time in reading my stupid comment now😆😆 But i'll definitely comment from the next update onwards😉 Please do accept my buddy request and PM me 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
So Anjali finally nailed some thought in Arnav's mind ...
Aman is back ,aakaash n Payal went together ...kahani badi spicy hoti jaa rahi hai😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Trying to put a face to Aman and I zeroed in on this guy.


Excited as I am about his return, he had better not trouble Khushi. Also when is NK going to meet Khushi? And when will Jun meet Khushi? Both of these events needs to happen. And can we set up Divyesh with Opposite Chawla? Akash with Payal and Aman with Renu Bhabhi. Sorry NK, YB did say that all sub-plots won't be resolved.

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