Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know why but I can never get enough of your updates!! Love it!!
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Arnav, Arnav, Arnav. I love you, but you are also very stupid. Maybe that is why I love you.
Poonam Raizada might do a million wrongs and Arnav can fix it all, but I think at the heart of the story is Arnav's acute class consciousness and his simultaneous fascination with Khushi as C Billi eloquently pointed out in an earlier comment. He struggled with this with when he was a teenager, as a young adult and in present time too. Unlike a lot of class conscious people, for him this is no blindspot. Of course he realises it today, but even as a silly college kid, he seemed to be aware of it. But he also is that college kid, who feels slighted by things that he imagines. Funnily enough, Khushi who is stoic and well-adjusted, also grapples with this paranoia. She reads too much into his casual gestures. He probably put the backpack away from her, just so that it was not in her way. But she immediately assumes that he is thinking of her as a thief or something. As much as she tells Preeto that she does not harbour ill-will towards Arnav, she is very hurt by Arnav's casual gestures more than she is bothered by Poonam Raizada's downright evil plans.

And while on the subject of Poonam Raizada. This woman is complex. But Anjali's comment that it must be dad's fault, somehow makes me suspect that Raizada Senior is not what he seems. Perhaps he had a roving eye, was a perv. Something seems off.

Interesting that everyone's favourite Aman makes an appearance finally 😆 I understand why he distanced himself from the Newons bunch after the suicide. He was the funny guy, the charmer I reckon and from that he went to the guy who attempted to kill himself. He probably feels embarrassed and judged by his former classmates, including Arnav. Who knows, maybe he blames Arnav for his suicide. I think he also realises how damaging it was to Khushi that she somehow got blamed for his suicide attempt. He might not have romantic feelings for her, but he certainly feels guilty. Arnav has only recently attempted the repair the damage with Khushi, but Aman seems to have been at it for a few years now. Though it is still not clear whether his relationship with Khushi transcended knock knock jokes email forwards.

And finally Lavanya-Preeto-Gagandeep. Haha. That was the most unlikely love triangle 😆 But I can see why La would be pissed. She loses boyfriend and by all accounts Gagandeep seems like a fine man, that too to her former best friend's current best friend. And the weight gain might be even making her go through some body-image issues for all we know. She does not like Joseph's. Poor girl.

One thing I noted is that Payal does not have much to do in your notes from the past. She is not so intertwined in the mess of these people's history, which is why she is all breezy, fabulous and I-don't-give-a-damn in present time. There is nothing to bring her down 😆

I love this story and how worked up I get over all the characters and all the feelings.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...
Poonam raizada is so sick...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Just love spending time in The world of New-Onites...

Khushi does not like to feel inferior...she is determined not to be a victim...wow. I love this girl and her spunk.

ROFL...even if they wanted to! Khushi and Arnav can not get away from each other...their lives are so intertwined and it's fate and destiny all combined ...everyone pairs the two together so it's almost like word association that Lavanya, Preeto and even Khushi's dad notice how Arnav is always associated with Khushi.

"Baba was the first to get into the coach and had said, "Arrey, yeh ladka yahan bhi hai." And there she saw him, the seat number forty-seven to her forty-eight, Arnav Raizada, glowering at her.

She gave up."

So Aman really really liked Khushi...I am still waiting for him to make an appearance and give Arnav a run for his money ...

Now we almost know how Khushi lost her scholarship...😭



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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh ok so I think this gagandeep issue is the one that had strained Khushi and lavanya's friendship in the past and la was all being sarcastic bitch to Khushi ..
I would have to go back a few part and reread again ...
But a very nice detailed explaining
I love reading your story telling style
Plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!! Totally loved it!!!
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This is getting complicated. So will Poonam, who wasnt convinced about Arnav going to Bihar, come to think that Arnav went for Khushi and ultimately become the reason Khushi had to withdraw from Alchemy? Raizada family had clearly spelt D.O.O.M for Khushi.

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Going through the update again I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen at the camp..Khushi going to use Arnav's laptop..hmm ..would that lead to something..

I really like the aman angle in the story. Does he like Khushi or just feels bad that she got caught up in the suicide attempt.. I'm looking forward to his coming back in the story at present.

You know this story is becoming like the book where I want to cheat and skip a few pages and read ahead because in too curious to know what lies ahead..unfortunately I cannot do that here :-)
Edited by Dream_on - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

I thought khushi did not have a normal student life at all , apart from her struggle between studies & sports . We can find preetho in a group of friends . She has taken khushi to a movie forcibly bunking class for which or dear khushi s guilty . We cannot blame khushi , she comes from a middle class family for whom Malls , shopping is distant dream & not affordable too . Like khushi feared she bumped into La with her new boyfriend . Looks like Gagandeep-Preetho is the reason for La & khushi's estranged relationship .

This line caught my attention
''Young males crowd who were almost rubbing themselves against them as they tied to exit '' typical Male crowd who take advantage of the crowd Anand Raizada is worried about his daughters changing fantasy . Jalli's Business is always interesting ''Kupcakes & Kahaani " nice name though the business was in the verge of shutting down .
Khush has treated herself with icecream which was wasted by the boys , Aman surprised by buying her chocolate fudge which put khushi to lots of teasing , Looks like Arnav was jealous seeing Aman comfort khushi , so he is no more best friends with Aman . After reading tis particular incident I am desperate for Aman's comeback in khushi's life at present .
Arnav & khushi are travelling to Bihar , both are trying their best to avoid each other but the circumstances wouldn't allow . So officially this is their last meeting where Arnav leaves khushi in the crowd of railway station .
loving it
Edited by MDTharun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ah so gagandeep's the reason behind lavanya's and khushi's fight? Its so laughable! Nd punam raizada seems to have a deep paranoia for khushi..its clear now that she will withdraw the fund..such a mean lady! i'm so curious to know more about aman now all the more..after the ice cream parlour wala scene..

Your character's are so real radhika..i realy admire how you have fleshed out your characters without any stereotypes..without romanticizing poverty..

Hope ur son is better now..
Waiting for the next update..take care.

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