Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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manusmithcl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Looks like NK's words are gonna come true..Expecting to see both of them together this year...lovely chapter

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Radhika, as usual your notes are a treat to read. Thanks for the heads up.

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

So its Payal whom Akash loves and Arnav and Khushi were together at midnight! The secret eye talk between Akash and Khushi said what was proposed was what was very much needed? Is this what Lavanya kept asking him to do?

Loved this Jun who is in sync with his wife and not averse to ribbing her in a friendly manner...

Payal cant stop baiting Khushi can she... ???

Arnav as always is a bystander... Waiting to read the talk in private between Arnav and his dad

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.Sandal.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Amazing loved it, i am hooked to this story
Continue soon plzz

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Archana M H

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Ok, a few thoughts of mine after reading Part 2(I am sorry, but I don't remember the details from Part 1)

1. I liked the thing about the person you see at midnight on New Year's! It reminded me of one of the more enjoyable episodes of IPK! I also liked how the theory of probability explained that!

2. Aakash likes Payal, doesn't he? Damn! That breaks my fangirl heart! I adore your Aakash & totally, see why he is a 'Chick magnet' as NK puts it!😆

3. I love the friendship that Khushi & Aakash share! He has been there for her whenever she's been in need of any kind of support! I love that! And, it looks like Preeto & Aakash are the only 2 people Khushi relies on to any extent!

4. Good to see that Khushi's father has thawed a little! And, it's sweet the way Preeto & Aakash check up on Khushi! And, isn't Preeto amazing!😆

5. Anjali & Arjun are so adorable!

6. Senior Raizadas are annoying, especially Mrs. Raizada! Does she understand the concept of one leading one's life on one's own terms! The kids don't want a part in running Raizada Enterprises! Why say she knows better! They aren't thumb-sucking infants! They're grown-ups who have made a conscious choice! So far, I haven't seen a single reason to say anything that Mrs. Raizada has done is justifiable or excusable!

7. So, Khushi doesn't hold Arnav responsible for whatever happened with her! That has been clear for some chapters, now! But, her mind clearly tells her that she shouldn't have anything to do with him! Fate says otherwise, evidently!

8. Universe is, evidently consipiring to bring Arnav & Khushi face-to-face as frequently as possible! How will they deal with it & what comes off it in 2015 will be interesting!

9. Maybe, Arnav finally fixes something in Khushi's life by helping her save Tewari & Sons, & therefore breaking the pattern!

10. You keep putting up these amazing amazing chapters! I love how believable the story is, the characters are! And, I love the way you write! So, Radhika, kudos to you! You put up another great chapter! I am looking forward to the next one eagerly!

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uzam818

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

thanks dear
now the right pairs comes.

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pmpm1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Loving this story... very unique.

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Japonica

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: bkamber
Feel good Chapter.
No force can foil the master conspirator...DESTINY!!

Excellent story telling. Kudos. 👍🏼

And the AUTHOR, who is the master conspirator of all in creating the destiny that rules the lives of the characters in the story!😃

Superb updates YB, worth waiting for the time and peace to read them.

Arnav's remorse/ repentance feels rather ineffectual almost pointless in the face of Khushi's matter of fact acceptance of that fact the life is shit and one just has to get one with it as there is no point in dwelling upon it.

That is why her statement that he could help in making things better took my by surprise as it feels very unKhushi like to say such a thing. What did she actually meant by it?

I am worried about what Payal will get up to now that she knows so much about Khushi's life.

As I was catching up on the last 2 updates, it suddenly hit me that it is the 'voice' in your story, the subtle but seamless shifts in perspectives and voices, which allows us to get into the heads of the characters, bringing them alive to us and giving the story a three dimensional quality.