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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update
Beautifully written
Feeling bad for Arnav and Khushi
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a great writer you are!

You started off with Aman and Anita.. And can I say that I am so thrilled to see this young lady take matters into her own hands.. how did you put it?

Only fools look the other way when life insists on throwing such golden opportunities at you, she mused

And

And if a guy gets turned off by girls who believe in taking initiative", she had once told her friend, Aarti, "Then he is simply not worth making a move on

Absolutely!! I LOVE ANITA!! and your writing because you make me smile, you make me high-five myself, you make me shake with trepidation, you make me FEEL!! That is the power of your pen.. :)

This story couldnt go any faster for me.. Jenny!! I am rooting for all five of them - Anita for having the courage to follow her heart, Aman for falling down her rabbit hole , Lavanya for giving up.. and for Khushi for being so 'Khushi.'

But most of all Arnav - because - when you come right down to it - he is the one who is the most courageous - for having loved [tried really hard] and lost and for loving again.
Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
*giggle*
Sorry. This is not a giggling-wala chapter at all. But I can't help it. Because Aman and Anita are the cutest. THANK YOU! :D

*sigh*

Ab yeh toh hona hi tha. I had suspected that Manya's angry ravings come from tremendous guilt and frustration but that still doesn't make it okay for her to do what she did.
The extent of Lavanya's delusions and instability ought to have been evident to her family much before this, but it wasn't. And that's the real tragedy, isn't it? In most cases, the family doesn't realize just how serious things are until it's too late.

In this case, it took Lavanya's attempted suicide for them to take her mental health seriously. If Manya had paid a little more attention, if Arnav had been able to get past his anger and bitterness and recognize that Lavanya's obsession warranted clinical help and get in touch with her family to share his concerns...it's all a mess of could-have-beens.

Damn. I can just see Khushi deciding to move away from all this and try to find herself and what she truly stands for.

I'm glad Arnav's mom knows the truth about his relationship with Lavanya, though. Even if Arnav is unwilling to let Aarav's paternity be dragged through court, I still stand by my earlier belief that all the involved families need to know the truth here. Hiding this crucial bit of information, in this case, at least, is doing no one any good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
more power to arnav for figuring out the truth so quickly about manya's actions, despicable as they were. please do not put khushi into a self sacrificing avatar. it does not suit her personality. she went into this with her eyes open and she should have the courage of her convictions to stand by her actions. she needs a friend and right now, arnav is all she got. her parents are a writeoff in terms of support. i would love it if astha could talk some sense into khushi's mom or show her thru her actions that khushi is not at fault. sometimes it takes an outsider to take the blindfold off or to shame you into supporting your own kid.
anita is a great self assured character, love her. aman is too hung up on his past to see what is in front of him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Jenny, I don't know how I missed the previous update but I wanted to tell you that you wrote both the chapters beautifully. 😳⭐️ Arnav's pain is palpable and justified. He has been so wronged by lavanya yet even his own mother misjudged him. I am glad that he finally told the truth about Arnav's paternity so that astha can at least understand the enormity of deception from lavanya just to own Arnav. Lavanya is pathetic and a weak woman, totally consumed by her self interest. I really hope that khushi talks to Arnav and they get past this upheaval. Good that Arnav gets to know that khushi knows about lavanya. I really felt bad for Arnav and khushi ... So many forces trying to keep them apart when all they want is each other. On the other hand really enjoyed aman and Anita's interaction. It was really cute. 😆 Looking forward to the next update.
If you pm Jenny can you please pm me if its not a problem. Also really looking forward to reading your other story on the blog. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. I hope Lav sister apologize to khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor Arshi ...stuck with bit**h sisters one with her cheating and deceiving n other with her baseless assumptions...
That Manya is no better than Lavanya ...who the hell is she to blame others when she was not their for her own sister...horrible sisters...didn't even try to share her sisters pain ...she goes and blames khushi infront of her parents...

It's good that Lavanya didn't die of the stunt she pulled she deserves to face the consequence of her own action...

Poor khushi ...sometimes it's good to become bit**h and give as good as u got ...because ppl like Manya deserve that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome. ... I just feel for arnav ... Please khushi speak to him... At least manyta admit that what she done is wrong but damage is done I think
Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
thanks jenny for giving us a breather, aman and anita part was so so cute

but the highlight of the update was when arnav blasted manya and tell her off its high time that someone show these kashyap ther right place.

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
You are killing me with these sad updates.I know she is going to leave him and go away, i just know it. it is going to be devastating, I cant even think about it. He has been through so much already, and this is going to destroy him even more. so write these sad chapter jaldi jaldi and come to the meeting again part already. love the way you write though, i am so invested in this storyline, it feels like its real.
love ya

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