Arshi FF: Yearning of the Heart - Chapter 1 pg.12 16/01

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..ri..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

nice story.. loved it.
your way of writing is superb..
pm me for updates pls:-) New to your stories:-)

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Finally you are back and I finally got to read this!

You do know that you and your fictions were dearly missed.

Coming to the updates, the concept seems different and interesting. The character sketch is equally well explained. Khushi comes from a terrible past and I am glad she is no longer in the clutches of her evil husband (I have already considered him to be a villian). The same cannot be said about her kids though. The reason behind Khushi not getting Jiya and Abhi's custody doesn't seem to be clean and I cannot wait for the mystery of her past to unveil.

Everyone in the Shantivan is very accommodating towards Khushi. They love her dearly and wish to see her happy, her husband most of all. And like Nani mentioned, Anjali will come around too. The circumstances under which they met and got married seem to be very intriguing and I eagerly look forward for them to unfold.

I wonder if her ex-husband has something to do with Abhi's absence.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

p.s : I am so happy you will be updating the other fictions too. N&F it is next!!

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Interesting story. surely love this... Hope khushi will come over of her past... Eagerly waiting 4 the next part...

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deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

welcome back, its definitely sounding like a promising ff and im happy that u will be dealing with a real life situations that may people are going through. all the best and eagerly waiting for the 2nd chapter

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piggie

@piggie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

looks like a mature story.. and the title is defined from the first chapter itself.

sounds great.

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Onlooker

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Kushi divorced with two kids..and Arnav is her present husband..interesting..

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sanjuarshi

@sanjuarshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

kushi is divorced and mother of two kids who are adored by her new in laws... love the way nani made kushi see thru her fault and give a chance to her happiness.why did her son not come??waiting for the next update... thanks for the msg dear

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Awesome can't wait for the next part..

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Loved it

So khushi is divorced and has 2 kids. Arnav loves khushi and has married her. and khushi loves him too

I loved arnav's nani and father. Anjali is mean. And jiya is an adorable kid. she shares a good bond with arnav.

What about abhi? Is he nice?