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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update taarey's dance was good nice song selections
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Posted: 10 years ago
superbbb dear... dance part was fab... songs were gud... well written dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Very well written
Waiting for next part
Update soon
Do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Mindblowing update
You have a lovely choice for songs
The dances were beautiful
Rey is hurt...
Par now suspense khatam finally
Eagerly waiting for everyone's reaction
Please fo update soon and p me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!
Loved the dances :)
Happy Taani's team won
Loved the happiness Swayam showed for Taani even though his team lost :D
Hope everything between TaaRey becomes alright
Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice & interesting update
Loved the dance sequence
Waiting for the past
Do cont soon
Edited by dh19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no...
jab kuch acha hota toh uske baad hi prob kyun aati haiey
plzzz clear the drift btw Taarey
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
FLAMES part 4
nice update. loved it.
everyone is shocked to see flames team.
happy that flames won.
waiting to see how taani convince rey as he is very hurt.
what is truth that they stop performing.
hoping that there is no seperation of taarey.
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Posted: 10 years ago
A superb update.
Finally TaaRey met.
I hope all goes well.
Update soon. :) 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
First, Happy Valentine's Day❤️ to all. This is my valentine gift to all of you. I know I am terribly late. But kya karoon... Exams hai. Also I am not commenting on any of the stories. I am really sorry for that. But I am reading all of them. And all of them are superb.

CHAPTER 5


Taani ran as fast as she could in the direction in which Rey went. She saw Rey walking towards the beach and ran after him. She reached him and held his hand and turned him around. She saw that he had moist eyes with unshed tears. Taani felt bad seeing him cry.
Taani: Rey aap please roye mat. Mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta jab aap rote ho tab. please Rey, don't cry... atleast mere liye Rey stop crying ... please.
She put her hand on Rey's cheek, rubbing her thumb and wiping away the tears that were rolling down his eyes.
Rey : ( holding her hand) chali jao yaha se Taani ... isse pehle ki mai kuch aisa bol do ki jisse tum hurt ho... chali jao. mai is waqt right frame of mind mai nahi hu. aur mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu jise hum baad mai regret karenge. so pls chali jao.
Taani : nahi Rey, mai aapko chhod kar kahi nahi ja rahi hu. mai yaha aapko sach batane aayi hu aur mai sach bataye bina yaha se jaane nahi wali hu.
Rey : Taani please chali jao yaha se. mai is waqt tumse gussa hu aur tumhe kuch aisa bol donga jisse tum hurt ho jaogi. aur mai tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta.
Taani : Rey... par aap mujhse gussa kis baat par ho. isliye ki mai or Kria ek dusre ko jante hai ya fir isliye ki mai aur Shivam ek dusre ko jante hai? ??
Rey : dono mai se ek bhi nahi Taani. mai tumse gussa isliye hu kyunki tum do din se goa mai thi aur tumne mujhe batana zaruri bhi nahi samja. pichhle do din se kitne calls aur kitne messages liye hai maine tumhe ... par tumne ek ka bhi jawab dena zaruri nahi samja. tumhe andaza hai ki mai kitna guilty feel kar raha tha ki maine tumse jhooth bola par tumhe to meri padi hi nahi hai.
Taani : aisa nahi hai Rey, maine aap ko do din se dekha hai aur mai janti hu ki aap ko kaisa feel ho raha hoga. par Rey mai majbur thi Rey. maine promise kiya tha aur mai wo promise nahi tod sakti thi. aur mai abhi is waqt aap ko sab sach batane aayi hu Rey ... mere past ka sach... jo bohot kam logo ko pata hai.
Rey : aisi kya baat hai sweetheart jo bohot kam logo ko pata hai. but wait, that's besides the point. important baat yeh hai ki mujhe kyu kuch nahi pata hai? ??
Taani : Rey maine wohi to kaha ki mai aap ko chahkar bhi kuch nahi bata sakti thi as maine yeh promise kiya tha jisse mai abhi recently hi release hui hu.
Rey : tum yeh kya promise promise kar rahi ho meri to kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai. aur tumne mera pura plan bigaad ke rakh diya. sach mai tumhe kabhi gussa nahi aata kya Taani? ??
Taani : Rey aap yeh kya bol rahe ho??? maine aap ka konsa plan bigaada hai???
Rey : Taani jab maine tumhe mere saath stage pe dekha to I thought that I was dreaming. par that was not the case. tab mujhe realize hua ki tum goa mai thi phir bhi mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi. I could feel you around for two days yet could not see you. maine socha jab tumne mere saath ye game khela to kyu na mai bhi tumhe thoda shock doon. mujhe laga mai tum par chillaunga to tum mujhse gussa ho kar chali jaogi. aur phir mujhe tumhe romantically manane ka mauka mil jayega. par tum to naraz hi nahi hui.
Taani : iska yeh matlab hai ki aap mujhse sach main gussa nahi ho??? aap mere saath mazak kar rahe the.???
Rey : ha Taani mai mazak kar raha tha. tum meri jaan ho aur koi bhala apni jaan se kaise naraz rehearsal sakta hai. besides I am happy ki tum is waqt mere saath ho. and I must add ki tum bohot achha dance kar leti ho... even better than me.
Taani : matlab aapko mujhe Kria aur Shivam ke saath dekh kar koi problem nahi hai???
Rey : offo meri cutely weird Taani, nahi mujhe tumhe aur Shivam aur Kria ko saath mai dekh kar koi problem nahi. Taani Kria mera past thi... bt that's the point sweetheart ki wo mera past thi. usne ab mujhe affect karna bandh kar diya hai. aur rahi baat Shivam ki to mujhe use thanks kehna hai kyunki tum dono ki fake relationship ki wajah se I realized my love for you jaan.
Taani : Rey aap ko pata hai ki agar duniya mai most understanding boyfriend ka award hota na to wo aap ko hi milta. koi inta understanding kaise ho sakta hai. aap na world ke best boyfriend ho. mujhe to itna tension ho raha tha na ki mai aap ko kaise manaungi par yaha to case ulta hi hai. I love you Rey... I love you so much. sach mai Rey aap jaisa koi nahi tha, na hai aur na kabhi hoga. aur aap sirf aur sirf mere hai yeh baat par yakin karna thoda mushkil ho gaya hai mere liye. I am so lucky to have you in my life Rey. thank you so much for making my life so beautiful.
Rey : to yakin karna sikh lo Taani kyunki Reyansh singhania sirf aur sirf Taani shekhawat ke liye bana hai. aur tum haina yeh baat baat par sorry aur thank you bolna chhod do kyunki ( coming closer to her and snaking his arms around her waist ) girlfriends boyfriends ko sorry aur thank you nahi bolte. woh ek dusre ko direct gift dete hai.
Taani : ( sensing his intentions, she puts her arms around his neck, pulling him closer to her ) achha to aap ko gift chahiye. ( goes extremely near to his face so that there is one fingers space between their lips and whispers ) aap kahiye aap ko kya gift chahiye. I promise aap ko jo chahiye wo mai aap ko de dungi. ( gives a small peck near the corner of his lips and moves back.)
Rey was shocked as he never expected that Taani would do something like that. Taani saw Rey's expression and chuckled seeing his face, which was a mixture of surprise and shock. Hearing the sound, Rey came back to earth and smirked at Taani.
Rey : ( pulling her closer, if that was possible) jo chahiye wo milega??? Pakka??? Then piche mat hatna.
Taani : ha Rey, promise, jo chahiye wo milega.
Rey takes this as acceptance and smashes his hard lips on Taani's soft ones. He starts nibbling her lips, lining them with his tongue, asking for her permission to enter. Taani does not open her lips to tease him. Rey realizes this and he presses her belly slightly. Taani gasps out of pleasure and getting his chance, Rey enters inside her mouth. Feeling his tongue in her mouth, Taani starts reciprocating and the kiss becomes even more passionate. Their tongues start fighting for dominance. Taani slides her hands in Rey's hair and fists them. Rey's hands are busy caressing her waist. They both break their when they feel out of breath.
Taani : milgaya aapko aapka gift.
Rey : nahi Taani , yeh thodi na gift hota hai. Agar hota hai to bhi mujhe itna chhota gift nahi chahiye.
Taani : Rey aapko pata hai aap bohot besharam ho.
Rey : sweetheart tumne abhi apne besharam Rey ko dekha hi kaha hai.
Taani : (blushing) Rey abhi kuchh der pehle aapko mere promise ke bare main janna tha na???
Rey : ha Taani, wo mujhe abhi bhi janna hai.
Taani : To phir aap bathiye, main aapko sab batati hu.
Taani sat on the beach leaning her back against the rock while Rey kept his head in her lap and laid down. Taani stroked his hair lovingly and started....




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