My Heart Will Go On~AK~Ended on Pg 127~ - Page 65

Originally posted by: sweetiepie_05

omg...this is the best part u have ever written in my opinion! it was so touching....

continue revolutions too!!!

aww thank you, cept, I didn't really like this part, now that I read it over, I think it was really horrible and far from well-written… I didn't have the idea cleared out in my head, and I just wrote whatever and posted it without giving it any thought…anyways… glad u liked it and..I'll continue revolutions soon.. J

Originally posted by: Numera*

talk bout ironic lol i was listening to tere bin when i was reading it lol and then the song came in the fanfiction i loveeee that song!! that was the sweetest part ever!!!! continue soon!

lol..now that is pretty ironic..lol…i love that song too!! its so awesome, and i like atif's kuch is tarha too, its so cute (he sounds so depressed though, It seems as if he broke up with his girlfriend that he really liked or something lol, aww he needs a new girlfriend, lmao..)…and thanx, glad ya liked it

Originally posted by: tava

omg it was soo touching i just love ur ff

aww thanx, glad ya lyke it

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part...awwwww AK kissed so cute..cont soon

thanx.. yea…they kissed, cept now it looks kinda weird, cuz I wrote their second kiss..dont worry im not counting their kissed, lol… ill cont soon.

Originally posted by: Chick1

continue soon please
that was awsome and cute

aww thanx ..ill cont soon J

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

tht was truly the best part ever written in this fanfic! i almost had tears in my eyes i thought tht they wudnt say nethin again but im so happy angad finally confessed n kripa did too lol the last bit was kinda funny....angad tellin everyone 2 close their eyes but it was great!!!! continue sooon

thanx... aww i dint noe it was that touching ..and i am happy that they finally confessed too..lol ...but now that i read the part over to refresh my memory i am thinking, what the heck was i thinking, that part seriously was awful… I don't like it.. and I think the confessing thing went by fast, they didn't even like , talk and stuff, that was kinda random, I hated it.. if only. .i could go back in time and change it.. lol. .. and yea..it was really stupid, but kinda funny, I mean they were kissing so passionately, I know if I had like a lover boy I wouldn't really wanna make out with him in frnt of so many people….lol.. glad ya liked it..

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

awwwwwwww, that was a CUTE part!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!

thanx

Originally posted by: Andekhi

I am speechless!

That part was AMAZING! 👏 I am getting short of words to describe your ff's now. Beautifully written, brilliant scenes, and awesome dialogues everything was just perfect!! Truly the best part in this entire ff.

Good Job! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

⭐️ <-- I was just looking through the emotions, and noticed stars, so I am giving 5 stars for this part! Actually, all your ff's deserve 5 stars 😃 😃

aww thanx, cept i hated the part😆...and thanx, i love your ff better though!! you are an awesome writer and i do hope that you'll start anotehr ff after ending Mismatch😳

Originally posted by: maham_93

At last! my god! this is an awesum part!!! 👏 Luv it!

aww thanxx😳

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!
finally...its abt tyme they xpressed their luv...sheesh talk abt slow...lolz...luvd it!!thnks 4 da update

lol...thanxx...yea, that was really slow, five years later😆

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwwwwwwww amazing prt

thanx😳

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG! wot a butiful part!!! 😳
that woz jus sooo... PERFECT!!
n weirdly, this part u'd ritten... made me go into my own world altogetha.. yes, weird... nyway, loved d part! woz 2 good!!! 😛
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

thanx..lol...it made you go into your world, huh? elaborate! 😳lol😆

Originally posted by: iamsmart

it was gr8 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue

thanx, and i will continue asap😛

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

congratz on making a 100 pages!!

thanx😳

Originally posted by: maham_93

Oh yeah...congratz on 100 pages! btw whts ur name? ur id is a little confusing!

aww thanx😳...and my name is Madiha, yea my id is messed up😆..lol...when i joined i-f i never expected to make a single post or even start my own story and become so addicted to i made up a random id, i was just being random, but now i regret it, cuz i hate my id, its suppose to say eerier cept i misspellled it..lol..😆

p.s.- like my AIM icon says: I am not random, I just have many thoughts😛😆

iite, people, you guys are like completely awesome!!.i mean...aaaaaaaahhhhhh, i completed 100 pages!!!😆😳...its all because of you guys and your encouraging comment that i got this far or else this ff would'v ended a long time ago..so thanx and i love you all..mwahh..😳....ite, next part is coming up...umm..soon..lol...i was gonna continue but i had this science fair thing and my report card came in and all this other stuff that i got really busy and didnt even glance at teh next part, i have my idea sorted out and ill continue all my ffs asap!😊

haha same here i love that song kuch is tarah lol cant wait for the part!!

lol well waiting!!!
post it soon 😛




Hina

Part 31

One kiss. Three words. A feeling. A realization. A longing. Love. As they sat cuddled up, both silently recounted how their life had changed.

The party was over, after Kripa had met with the Khanna family, the elders had retired to bed. Angad, Kripa, Ananya, Nikhil, Prithvi, Josh, Mishty and Aaliya sat together in the living room, talking. The couples, Angad-Kripa, and Ananya-Nikhil were cuddled up joining conversations here and there. Josh was trying to flirt with Mishty and Aaliya, and getting nasty replies in return. Prithvi was text messaging someone, deeply observed in it.

"Lets play a game!" Aaliya said all of a sudden. Everyone groaned.

"No way, I am not playing any game that you came up with" Angad told her.

"Fine, don't play then, Kripa will play, right Kripa?" Aaliya asked.

Kripa looked from a bored Angad to Aaliya, who had a hopeful look on her face. "Um, what game is it?"

"Uh, okay, well, this game is called "Truth", someone will ask a question pointed specially at someone and they will have to answer it truthfully, even if they don't want to."

"See, I knew it was going to be stupid" Angad told Kripa. Ignoring him, she asked Aaliya, "How do you win?"

"To win," Aaliya continued. "A person has to refuse to answer a question, then, they get to ask a question and if whoever they asked, gets it right, they win."

"Huh?" everyone asked.

"Okay, so, for example, I ask, Josh a question, he either has to tell me the complete truth, or he can pass and ask me a question instead. The catch is, the question has to be extremely hard, because he wouldn't want me to win, so if I am not able to answer it, then he wins!"

"Uh, I have heard of that game, except how the he** are we suppose to play with so many people?" Ananya asked.

"Uh, somehow, so who is in" Aaliya asked.

"Me" Ananya replied.

"I'll play" said Mishty.

The girls looked at Kripa, who looked at Angad, and then back at them. "Okay, count me in"

"Kripa!" Angad said annoyed.

"What?" she asked him with a cute look on her face. "Angad is playing too," she told everyone else. Angad did not reply so they turned to Prithvi who was not paying attention at all, still text messaging someone.

"Hey lover boy are you playing or not?" Mishty asked.

"Uh, what?" he asked, a bit embarrassed.

"Forget him" she told the rest, and they turned to Nikhil who on Ananya's pleas agreed to play.

"Okay, hmm, I'll start first!" said Aaliya. Everyone turned their attention to her. "I'll ask… Angad!"

Angad rolled his eyes. "Go ahead, Your Highness"

"Hmm… how many girls did you date in Paris?" she asked with a wink.

"None" Angad answered smoothly.

"Yea right" Kripa replied.

"I am dead serious" he replied with a serious look. "I didn't date a single girl in Paris."

Everyone was quiet. "Awww" Aaliya said after awhile. "Now that is sweet, so you guys have been hiding your love all these years?"

Kripa blushed and Angad just gave her a one hand hug and squeeze like he'd never let go. They got their answer, and so the game moved on.

"Ok" Angad began. "Now, its my turn… hmm.. my question is for.. Prithvi"

Everyone turned to Prithvi who was still text-messaging someone. They all groaned when they saw that he wasn't paying attention and trying to hide the cell phone.

"Who are you messaging?" Angad asked, annoyed.

Prithvi went red. "Um, er, uh, a friend"

"Ria" Aaliya piped up while Prithvi gave her a killer look.

"Ohhh, I remember, you guys are still dating?" Kripa asked.

"Yea" Prithvi replied.

"Why were you so nervous then, its just Ria?" Angad asked.

"Well, I, uh, I have to tell you guys something" said Prithvi.

"Go ahead bro" Mishty said curiously.

"Well, I, uh, proposed to Ria" he replied.

"And…" Ananya asked.

"And… uh.. she said yes!"

"Oh my god!" they all screamed.

"Congrats man" said Kripa.

"Thanks"

Everyone started congratulating him and then Aaliya asked the question running through everyone's minds.

"So, why were you hiding this, and, when did it happen?"

"Well" Prithvi began. "I didn't really wanna make it public yet, and it happened a week ago at a dance, when I went to meet her, you guys are the first to know, I didn't tell anyone because…"

"Because you weren't sure if mom and dad would approve?" asked Josh.

Prithvi nodded, while everyone turned to Josh.

"Well, my parents didn't know about Ria and Prithvi dating, and they already have chosen a few guys for her, who she keeps on rejecting, and they really want her to get married to this other guy and Ria loves Prithvi but is scared to bring him up… "

"Ooh" they all muttered.

"Well, how about if my parents meet your parents with a marriage proposal"

"For?" Josh asked, confused.

Everyone gave Josh a look. "For Prithvi and Ria" they replied.

"Oohhh" Josh replied. "Yea.. cept who will talk to them?"

"I'll do it" Angad volunteered.

"Thanks man" Prithvi told him after they planned the conversation.

"No problem buddy" Angad told him.

"I owe you, maybe ill talk to your parents about your and Kripa's marriage" Prithvi replied with a wink.

"I don't think you'll have to do that" said Aaliya. "Everyone already knows"

Angad and Kripa went red as everyone laughed.

"Okay, on with the game" said Nikhil.

"All right, now, its… someone's turn to ask Kripa a question!" said Josh.

"Ok, I'll do the honors" said Prithvi. "Hmm.. …. Why…did you leave?"

And that was it. Prithvi had asked the question running though every single person's mind, but no one had asked it. it was out in the open now. Everyone looked at Kripa, who was just shocked. She knew it would come someday, the question. But it was too early. She stayed quiet. She couldn't lie. These were her friends. She looked at Angad. Would he still love her if he found out? Would he believe her? She would have to tell him someday, she thought while looking at his questioning look.

She turned to Prithvi. "Pass" she told him.

To be cont'd…sowwie.. i promise ill continue tommorow...😭😊

i m looking for a GUN!! dead serious.. u left us hanging!! i wanna kno the truth.. wow.. ithought it was just that her and angad didnt work out.. whao didnt kno there was much more to it.. cant wait now.. the part was great!
luv
mansi

omg that was sooo awesome!! cant wait til tomorrow when this secret is revealed!!

awww... sweet game lol i played this with my cousins once lol and made him slip out something boy he wished he never said! lol well rules r rules soo even thought io took him 4 hours to say one worrd lol "YES" i made him say it!!! hmm good times!!!!!!1!!!
lol and ofcrouse awseom part!!
and i'll be waiting for u to continue tommarow!!!


luts of luv and sugar
Hina 😊

great work as usual...luvd da truth game...wonder if it'll work wid my bro...drez loads i wanna get off him so i can blackmail himlater..😛

Awesome... even i really wanna know y she left... pls open solve this mystery soon... loll 😆

omg u killin me here i wanna noe already lol
awesome part
cont soon