FF- Arshi- Twist of Fate- Ch38+Epilogue Pg36 (29/05/15) | COMPLETED

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Posted: 10 years ago

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very beautiful story. loved it.

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Not a good arshi story... I don't think anyone in their right mind would go back to the person who has hurt them n slept with numerous woman in front of them... U can say it is a nk n lavanya story.. Sorry to say a terrible arshi story..

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome ending, thank you kashi. :)

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Kritika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice end dear...
love it
finally they r happy in there married life

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kashishkPM

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Originally posted by: roopathomas
Not a good arshi story... I don't think anyone in their right mind would go back to the person who has hurt them n slept with numerous woman in front of them... U can say it is a nk n lavanya story.. Sorry to say a terrible arshi story..

Maybe if I was not writing here, this story would have been different but then some people are strange in real life too. I have seen people staying with people and just taking all the shit, and here she is giving him a second chance when she knows he has changed and won't hurt her. Love is beyond logic.

Having said that, the feminist in me sides with you ;)

Loads of love<333

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Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Very happy ending.

Glad Arnav was given a chance to redeem himself.

but that was more with the khushi's love and a big heart.

Arnav had to work hard for it.

But mostly happy for the kids getting their parents together.

He gifted her a house which she dreamt of when they were friends. This proves that he always paid attention to her every little dream even when he hated her.

They loved each other even though it was a bitter memory of the past

Khushi indeed is a strong woman to stand up and make something of her life in fact succeeded. The courage and strength to trust again is something that not everyone has:-).

The epilogue was nice. They got another chance to experience another baby.

A small complain or demand i would have liked if there were more of little arshi moments when Arnav actually wanted to experience with having a baby. It went fast track.

So greedy I am when it comes to arshi in any story. I am always wanting more.

But that's fine overall a fabulous story with its amazing highs and lows. At times when I felt there is no way back for Arnav in khushi's life you made it possible and that too with conviction not just a sorry but making him earn it.

Not to mention he did it under a mu by people who he considered family but this deeds weren't pardonable but things happen and each person has their own beliefs and values and mindset.

Most importantly khushi did it mostly for her kids than herself. If Arnav didn't change khushi wouldn't have taken him back.

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kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: renee.bee
Very happy ending.
Glad Arnav was given a chance to redeem himself.
but that was more with the khushi's love and a big heart.

Arnav had to work hard for it.

But mostly happy for the kids getting their parents together.

The epilogue was nice. They got another chance to experience another baby.

A small complain would have like if you had more of little arshi moments when Arnav actually wanted to experience with having a baby.

I thought you would show it but it went fast track.

But that's fine overall a fabulous story with its amazing highs and lows.

Hey thanks a loads guys for the compliments and accepting the end or even criticizing it.

Yes it has to do with Khushi's love, completely.

I actually wrote that story in 2011 , I guess I quite rushed it since the story was getting too long or I might have been going through writer's block, I don't know why I rushed it. The ideal epilogue, I feel, should have been some moment of pregnancy and the delivery.

Now that I re-read myself the story, I found loads of glitches.

If loads of people demand for it, I mean change the title from epilogue to chapter 39 and add epilogue but that won't be any time soon, loads of things going on at my end, which I hope ends in positivity.

Thanks once again,

Loads of love<333

Kashish