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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome ending! Evil gone forever! Thnx fr pm! Lovely pics?

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sita_rama

@sita_rama

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Nice update

thanks for the pm

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Such a sweet short story
so mahi adopted her niece because that ba***rd killed her parents
glad he got stopped b4 he could again kill anyone
Ranvi was so sweet to pari n think he was smitten by mahi from get go
Loved it
thanks for pm n plz keep em coming my way

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part one is amazing dear

Love the pari dear

Thanks for your pm dear

Happy New year

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

I loved this quickie short and lovely three shot jas👏👏👏👏...

Every part was simple but beautiful enough to keep one hooked to the story😊😊😊😊...

Even this last part was refreshing😳😳😳...

Finally their enemy chandrakanth killed and they are free to live a happy life😛...

And my favorite scene was when mahi told ranvi about pari's parents and when ranvi told pari to call him papa😃😃😃...

And ranvi,mahi...and pari I loved three of them...they were all cute in their own way😳😳😳...

And must say the edits were awesome...truly complimenting the story...

Hope to see more such stories from you dear😊😊😊😊...

HAPPY NEW YEAR😳😳😳😳🤗

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

It was so interesting...

Deepika n Vivien...good couple 😊

Mahi was a loving massi ...

n Ranvi Was a gr8 lover...

But mmy favourite character was The pretty fairy-Pari...

Unfortunately,her parents were no more..

But she found her mother in her massive n father in her teacher..

Thank God...

Police reached in time n Chandrakant was killed by police...

Saving us the complications...

I love happy endings...😃

Edited by pakpearl - 10 years ago

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Jasmine dear... was missing for a long time...but now trying to catch up on all lost time and reading...

Read this at a stretch...wonderful as always...

Thanx for it and for the pm also...