Fragrant candles Vivian Deepika TS last Part pg7 Banner on Pg1 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Wow a lovely TS! I read both parts together and I rather enjoyed it. Looks like you're a huge Vivian fan!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
thx a lot.give my thx 2 ur hus also.2 b frank I have not watched pyar ki ek kahani i'vent even seen madhubala properly.But I've seen kasam se.I don't visit pyar ki forum.i just got the pic from google.

Originally posted by: RIMO9013

just awesome,what a lovely story telling,i lost in the story for some mins,and one more thing ur pic selection is too good,it seems that u r a true vd lover and peep in pkyek forum also i so want to see vivi this type of soft,sensitive character on screen,lovely concept dear,its a cute christmass gift for me and i read it with my hubby together,and he also love it very much,eagerly waiting for paris reaction on ranvi being her papa,i love vivi character name RANVI ,plz continue soon

thanks for pm me dear MERRY CHRISTMASS TO U AND UR FAMILY

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Lovely part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Both the updates are nice...
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/4265889/arshi-os-rab-ne-bana-di-jodi-banner-updatd plz have a look on my friend Sydell's Arshi Os Rabne bana di Jodi.


Thanks a lot 4 supporting this TS.This is the last part.Plz don't just write nice ending.plz give a detailed comment.also write ur fav scene n character n y u like them.

Fragrant candles Part 3

Ranvi-Mahi got engaged.

They exchanged rings at the engagement party.They were very happy.


Pari was very happy:Hey...Mumma and Ranvi Sir...

Ranvi:Not Ranvi Sir...your papa...

Pari smiled cutely:Papa!

She kissed his cheek.

Ranvi,Mahi and her parents were very happy.

Music was played.

Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena

Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)

Ranvi-Mahi started dancing passionately.Heart shaped balloons flew above them.

Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri


They got intimate and romantic.

Main tenu samjhava ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui yon jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawa ki

Na tere bina lagda jee(Humpty Sharma Ki Dulhania ).


Unexpectedly they saw a scary face.

Mahi's lips shivered:Chandrakanth!

Ranvi was shocked.

M:Why is he always coming on auspicious occasions?

Chandrakanth:I escaped from the jail specially to destroy your happiness.

He took a gun and pointed it at them .

The guests got scared and ran away.

Mahi's father Vishnu:I beg you.Please don't detroy my other daughter's happiness too.

Chandrakanth laughed loudly upsetting everyone.

Ranvi tried to snatch the gun from him.After a big struggle he took the gun from him and threw it on the floor.Chandrakanth pushed Ranvi and he hit his forehead on the flower vase and started bleeding.

Mahi screamed:Ranviii!

Chandrakanth attacked Mahi's father Vishnu.

Mahi couldn't bear it.

M:Please leave my dad.

Chandrakanth laughed loudly.Mahi took the gun from the floor

and pointed it at him.

She closed her eyes in fear.

A gun shot...

She opened her eyes slowly.She saw him dead on the floor.

She saw Policemen and guns in their hands.

Mahi's mother Radhika:Beta,you didn't shoot him.The Policemen I called came on time and shot that devil.

Mahi was relieved.

Somehow Ranvi got up and came towards Mahi.

R:Don't worry Mahi.That devil has gone forever.

They noticed Pari holding Mahi's saree pallu in fear.

Mahi held her closer.Ranvi held Pari in his arms.

R:Don't be scared Pari.We all are with you.

Days passed...

The wedding night of Ranvi-Mahi has reached.

Seeing Mahi as a bride Ranvi's eyes got stuck up to her's.

R:Mahi...you are a beauty.

She blushed.


They wed each other

and lived happily with Pari.

The end.

Edited by LizzieBennet - 1 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Res,
I'm first, yayyy

Unres,

The last part was really awesome,👏
I love the pics also, great edits.

So, Mahi and Ranvi's sangeet toook place,
the scene between Ranvi and Pari was cute,😳

But, this chandrakant came here also,😡
Mahi picked up the gun and was about to shoot him
Fortunately, the police came,and shot him.

And finally, we got a happy ending,

Mahi and Ranvi got married and
Pari got a father, Mahi got happiness too.

My favourite scene was one Mahi related her story to Ranvi, it was very emotional.
My favourite Character was Ranvi as he supported Mahi in every step.

It was a cute story andd I really liked reading it.

Thanks for the PM dear,
keep writing ur beautiful stories.



Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Lovely one dear
Fianally chandrakanth ka THE END
And Mahi Ravi and Park forever
Loved it
Radhika called the policemen in good timing that's brilliant loved the song Mein tenu samjhawan
And nice edits dear
Keep writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
awesome ending edits r beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
I luved all characters bt ranvi's was special.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Ranvi was my fav bcoz it was played bt my cutiepie vivi.

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