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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

its a great part
be honest i find the way arnav and his ex wife share the bond of friendship shows a maturity
i am not comparing your this great work ...but pointing ekta 's a show will be different way if it make in a logical one
nice work keep it up

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guy3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Beautiful conversation between manorama and Khushi.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

very well written..interesting update...👍🏼

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Commented on page 35.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117887334

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day_lily

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Manorama n Khushi shares a very beautiful relationship...

cant wait for Arhi to meet again in Delhi...

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orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

The update is beautiful...👏

Poor Khushi😭 Khushi is genuinely not able to overcome NK's loss... At such young age, Khushi suffered the demise of her husband...😭 Manorama & Khushi share a very beautiful relation...

But Khushi definitely needs someone like Arnav to overcome NK's loss & to think about her future... Its difficult to live a lonely life without a life partner... Khushi deserves to be loved...

Hope so Arnav & Khushi's love blossoms...

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rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

"Khushi would have never guessed that sleep would be one of the many things that left with the person who died." --- how did you know about this MB. I experience loss of sleep whenever my husband is away on business trip, and that's when I was never used to sleep with anyone before marriage. Thinks like these makes this story so real and imagining the loss of Khushi is very painful.

Especially the way you wrote how her fear regarding thunder, lightening and dislike for rain doesn't hold any place after NK, coz now she has bigger fight going own in her heart and mind against loneliness.

I loved the convo between Manorama and Khushi the way you depicted thdifference between two relationship, two weddings. It makes it clear hat what Khushi lost was not only her husband, father of her child but also her best friend. The memory regarding Khushi's nose pin and there fight for same was hilarious yet painful when she had tears with that smile and an ache in her heart with which she called ..."Naren".

The text msg between Khushi and Arnav was nice, it is truly something about phone that make us take a plunge on certain things which we won't do face to face. Just like Khushi's asking "why?" .

I loved the eagerness with which Khushi was waiting for Arnav's response and her disappointment on the very first text being from Lavanya and not ASR. They have made new memories which will keep them accompany till they meet agin. And hopefully when they does Khushi won't feel the same amount of pain with NK's memories.

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deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

HAPPY NEW YEAR...😊

fab update👏..loved it.

feels like reading your story takes me to a different place in all.. its just like a simple beautiful woven piece..

loved the convo between khushi and arnav..

im really eager to see what was between khushi and arnav before NK entering her life.. is it just frienship or something else ? or if its more than friendship then why with NK ?

i believe that there is much more..

waiting for their delhi visit..

sometimes life is al about second chances.. but sometimes it takes a lot to let it happen..

waiting for the next update

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Totally loved this update
Loved the memories of NK - this guy seems to be one great character - would love to read more about him - the moments and convo shared by manorama and khushi was very emotional and good - I can see from where NK has got his goodness - I could see the worry and love of Lav in that one message - I could see through the SMS, the desperation with which arnav wanted to be back in touch with khushi.
All in all a lovely update
I missed meera in this updTe
Thx for the lovely update MB
Will wait for the next